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A Remote Feeling

Pete and Rhonda were honoured on their special occasion, by their families and friends who joined in a celebration. ‘I can’t believe that all this time has gone,’ that’s what Peter said, but on this day it’s twenty years, since both of them were wed. A party lunch all through the afternoon, so just after tea, most guests were leaving to go home, even though it’s early, and by eight o’clock all guests have gone, so to leave them free, when Pete suggests an early night and Rhonda does agree. And once in bed it appeared, there be another honeymoon, for Rhonda felt a roaming hand upon her back and soon, the hand moved up to feel her neck then down her back again, right to the small above her buttocks but there did not remain. Pete’s hand caressed her shoulders and then moved around her neck, before gently moving ‘cross her breasts, which Rhonda failed to check. His hand moved across her lower stomach, then up to her arm pit, before across her breasts again, and Rhonda’s eyes had lit. Along the outside of her leg; passed her calf and to her foot, Pete moved his hand so very gently, and after that he put, his hand on Rhonda’s left knee and moved it up her inner thigh, before repeating on her right leg and Rhonda gave a sigh. But Pete stopped and then rolled over and turned on the T.V. leaving Rhonda rather flustered on this their anniversary. ‘Why did you stop?’ She purred before, Pete made this callous quote, ‘I got what I was after Darling - I found the remote.’

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/15/2019 9:25:00 AM
My husband and I enjoy all your poems - our story telling is somewhat alike as we mostly write, wholesome poems of everyday life. We both LOL with another of your very wonderful poems - well done Lindsay
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 3/21/2019 7:58:00 PM
Hey Jennifer … I believe we are like two peas in a pod when it comes to story telling, although with different formats, and that can only be a good thing. I do enjoy your tales - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 3/12/2019 4:55:00 PM
Another great one with surprise ending. I'm guessing it didn't go well for the fellow after that!.......pat
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Date: 3/13/2019 1:41:00 AM
G'day Pat … I dare say his diet consisted of hot tongue and cold shoulder for quite some time - thanks Pat - Lindsay
Date: 3/12/2019 10:21:00 AM
Lindsay, I was lost in the sensual mood of your poem and then .. I fell, wonderful writing, I loved this write ~
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Date: 3/13/2019 1:39:00 AM
Hello Dear Heart … hopefully not a typical bloke but more an exception - but I can't be sure - thank you Dear Heart - Lindsay
Date: 3/12/2019 7:26:00 AM
Ha ha Laurie: You are a true humorist. A rare talent to make people laugh. Wonderful to read you again.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 3/13/2019 1:36:00 AM
G'day Suzanne … thank you for your positive comment Suzanne. I enjoyed the poems of yours today - Lindsay
Date: 3/10/2019 4:31:00 PM
Lindsay, I laffed so loud it startled my cat Jeff who was lying on the desk here as I type this! I,m sending this to some of my fans and fannies. Keep on cranking them out for our delight, Mate. G'day sir - Bob
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 3/13/2019 1:34:00 AM
G'day Bob … I must admit, I do like leading the readers up the garden path at times - I'll keep trying Bob - Lindsay
Date: 3/10/2019 1:07:00 PM
Well done, Lindsay! Aloha! Rico
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 3/13/2019 1:32:00 AM
The dog house is not as bad as what they say Rico, but doing the cooking sucks - catch you soon Rico - Lindsay
Date: 3/10/2019 12:22:00 AM
You had me getting all hot and bothered lol. A cracker of an ending Lindsay.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 3/13/2019 1:31:00 AM
Thank you Tom … well Pete did get his priorities right Tom, so he thinks. I hope the shows on TV were good - catch you soon Tom - Lindsay

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