A Reflective Sheen

I'm in a café booth nursing a hot coffee. And, between steamy sips, I stare at a mirror. There, reality's a reflection, not real. And, like caricatures, flaws come into focus. I know; it's merely glass, with a reflective sheen. And yet, I am transfixed; scanning strangers' faces. My eyes get scrutinized; when I stare at myself. And it's fascinating; guessing who will blink first. Shifting shadows provide this free entertainment. And voyeurs, stealthily watch life slip by unseen.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Gauthier Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 8:22 AM
A most delightful read, Emile. I particularly love these two phrases "And it's fascinating guessing who’ll blink first." and "And voyeurs stealthily watch time slip by unseen." Much enjoyed.
Pinet Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 9:56 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate you insightful comments. Emile.
Guzzi Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 3:12 PM
People watching! I have a friend who really loves to just watch any crowd. I suppose its harmless [I hate crowd LOL] Nice verse here. Light & Love
Pinet Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 6:56 PM
Thanks Debbie, I appreciate your friendly visits. Emile.
Onclaud Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 4:51 PM
superb work with puzzling mirror images, emile... love the semi abstract mood of this one.. well composed!.. huggs
Pinet Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 9:55 AM
Thank you Nette, I enjoy your friendly visits and encouraging words. Emile.
Kendrick Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 4:07 PM
Those mirrors draw our attention..I have found there is an old woman who now stands between me and the mirror and it is very scary..I don't know who this old woman is.Thanks for stopping by..Time is runing out but then it could go on for more years than I can think about with each generation seeing more degeneration..Sara
Pinet Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 4:20 PM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace