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A Razors Edge

On a razors edge we walk Palpable, the strain. Days go by, we hardly talk Yet still we play this game. As you pass me in the hall You barely raise a smile. Why do I stay at all, For it hurts me all the while. When I see that vacant look, Love has surely died. Fragile were the steps I took, But pointless... still, I tried. Fiction write Entry for Fragile - Poetry Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton 15/10/2017

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Date: 10/25/2017 5:03:00 PM
Beautiful write, Gary - had to read it twice, (for enjoyment's sake) - best wishes and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-)
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/25/2017 5:14:00 PM
Thank you Gregory :)
Date: 10/18/2017 10:18:00 PM
Well done Gary enjoyed this one, congrats on a fine placement!
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/19/2017 4:57:00 AM
Thank you John :)
Date: 10/17/2017 9:49:00 AM
Oh this is really good! GL in contest! I think this will be at top!
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Date: 10/17/2017 11:41:00 AM
Thank you Kim :)
Date: 10/16/2017 9:58:00 PM
This accurately summons moments I once lived through. Thankfully long ago, and I can bear them now. Your poem was quite bearable and effortlessly appealing.
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/17/2017 5:44:00 AM
Thank you Mark :)
Date: 10/15/2017 3:47:00 PM
Been there, you have captured it perfectly on your swords edge. My best to you for the contest xomo
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/15/2017 3:48:00 PM
Thank you Maureen :)
Date: 10/15/2017 2:37:00 PM
In this poem Gary Smith you are hurting. This is a sad poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/15/2017 2:59:00 PM
Thank you Darlene :)

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