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A Rainbow and Icles

The heavy snow fall Then the freezing rain The sun begins to shine All the roads are cleared For cars to travel on I see the bare trees Wearing icles A beautiful sight Everywhere I look The trees are the same All dressed up for Christmas Lots of colours shown From the sun that shines God created it.

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Date: 10/25/2017 1:33:00 PM
There were icicles on the edge of my roof. I'd make a snowball and knock them down when I was a boy.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/25/2017 3:01:00 PM
Did you knock them all down? I remember as a little girl the house we lived in had icicles on the roof. They were huge!!!have a nice day my friend.
Date: 10/12/2017 9:05:00 PM
Marvelous wonders expressed, Darlene. Nature reveals easy to behold miracles each day. Your observant pen captures this simple truth w/pastoral elegance and grace. You are a very soul connected poetess, dear. I enjoy your poetry immensely. Excellent write. Love and joy always.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/13/2017 7:36:00 AM
Thank you Freddie,I write what I always write what I write what I see in nature.I also enjoy your poetry. Love,Peace and love Always my friend.
Date: 10/9/2017 11:17:00 AM
Such beautiful poem.. How many of his wonders can you deny?
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/9/2017 1:55:00 PM
I cannot deny his wonders. They are so beautiful to see. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 10/9/2017 9:28:00 AM
What a beautiful poem Darlene I love the imagery you put forth in it. You described a sunny winter day so well nicely done.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/9/2017 10:15:00 AM
Thank you Edward,this is how I see rainbows and icles, on a sunny day.
Date: 10/8/2017 10:46:00 PM
Beautiful Darlene, but please lets not rush the winter in!!!! :) Loves this!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/9/2017 7:44:00 AM
Hello Arthur,rush the winter... I would not think of it. It is not my favourite season. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 10/8/2017 9:44:00 PM
What a lovely poem Darlene. The images and your words make for a great read.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/9/2017 7:47:00 AM
Hello James,this is the images i see after the freezing rain comes. have a nice day my friend.

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