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A Rain of Feelings

A RAIN OF FEELINGS By Dana J Brown I touched her arm,she flinched. It started raining. I glanced in her eyes, she turned away. Rain ran down my face. I spoke to her ,she ignored me. The sky turned darker. She turned away ,and left me. The rain came harder ,the thunder roared. Is it a tear in my eye, or just the rain?

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Date: 4/8/2016 2:28:00 AM
awesome poem, Dana. linda
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Date: 8/25/2015 10:43:00 PM
Dana, Enjoyed this very much... SKAT
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Date: 11/10/2013 5:01:00 PM
- A poem by touching thoughts and words, well written Dana. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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