A QUINTESSENTIAL NOTE TO YOU

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Just a fun one.' Fudge done..LOL)))

Create your lines, Both soft and strong Make them intuitive (yet not too long!) The spectators require The reader needs! Tactile verses … Responsive languor..Yet with speed. If you aim to please The human judge. You will only miss.' To be later lampooned O’er the slightest smudge.. Instead to prevail Load your ballista with fudge. To smother those and their p’etards Also their various other senses (until they can’t bloody budge). ©Joe Maverick 21 June 2025

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Joe Dimino

Date: 6/23/2025 11:26:00 AM

"Instead to prevail Load your ballista with fudge." -- Fudge got my attention..delicious. Our writes will never please everyone...if we please ourselves, feeling we have written with betterment-purpose -- perhaps pleased God (one can only hope) then it has been time well spent. Like Valsa says, Living Words.

Joe Dimino
Date: 6/23/2025 1:46:00 PM

I appreciate all comments, Joe; both pro and con. Helps keep my mind in balance, and also open. I know nothing.

Joe Maverick
Date: 6/23/2025 1:26:00 PM

So glad to see your words Joe Dimino..' your other poem got My thoughts and memory Going on past appreciation or Lack of.? With critical commenting.'

Valsa George

Date: 6/22/2025 1:54:00 AM

Make the verse intuitive, tactile and concise. Never too long! Well said dear Joe.

Joe Maverick
Date: 6/22/2025 2:53:00 AM

Well commented dear Valsa You are a blessing on soup.'