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A Quiet Visit

I smile remembering this small white house surrounded by the ordinary things-- a neat, green yard and stately cedar trees, a narrow gravel drive, the birds of spring. Its most impressive feature was the swing, now empty, faded, creaking in the wind. The couple who once sat here side by side reached out to me, and I became their friend. I can't rest in a swing no longer safe. I'm satisfied to stand and reminisce about the time when I, a restless youth, was mentored by a couple I so miss. Date: August 31, 2017 Contest Title: Your Very Best Rhyme of All Time (that has never won a contest) Sponsor: Brenda Chiri August 26, 2022 entered in the 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 13 Contest Sponsor: Mark Toney

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Date: 6/17/2017 10:13:00 AM
Hello friend. Its been a while. LORD! This is just vintage you! Excellent, Awesome and a master in this covetous craft of writing. Keep on flowing the ink of your mind. A 7 for sure.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/17/2017 10:19:00 AM
Funom, you have made my day! Thank you so much. It was great to hear from you. Janice
Date: 6/5/2017 5:11:00 AM
Janice, this poem has the beautiful kind of nostalgia that puts a lump in your throat! The way you have this laid out in form and your content are both superb! : )
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/5/2017 7:12:00 AM
Connie, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 6/4/2017 7:20:00 PM
beautifully penned Janice..best wishes
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/4/2017 8:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph! Janice
Date: 6/4/2017 5:47:00 PM
this was simply beautiful, Janice!!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/4/2017 8:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea! Janice
Date: 6/4/2017 2:58:00 PM
Very evocative, Janice. Tugs me back to earlier years. Good luck in the contest. // Barry.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/4/2017 9:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Barry. Janice
Date: 6/3/2017 6:01:00 AM
I do have exactly identical memories ... can very gladly relate to ... lovely ...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/3/2017 7:49:00 AM
Probir, thank you so much! Janice

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