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A Quiet Man

He was a good man, he was strong. He knew the difference between right and wrong. His quiet presence reassured, Rightly so, he was self assured. A hard worker, no job ever too small, a perfectionist, handling it all. He spoke when he had something to say. Quietly going about his duties of the day. He could be rigid in what he believed. It was his way, the right way, he perceived. He provided, his family an exceptional life. It weighed heavily, when there was strife. His faith was strong, a belief in God above. Words didn't come easy, I knew I was loved. Work was foremost, no time for play. Always busy until the end of the day. He was determined to see things through, If not to his liking, his eyes, ice cold blue. He kept his emotions hidden away, He was not comfortable with a display. He gave his life everything that he had , He was my hero, he was my dad.

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Date: 1/7/2019 11:50:00 AM
A very nice tribute to your Dad, Sandy! Well done :)
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 1/7/2019 12:28:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi
Date: 1/5/2019 11:29:00 PM
Beautifully done. Reminds me of my Dad. He was so quiet, but when he spoke, everyone turned to listen.
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 1/6/2019 1:11:00 AM
Thank you, Caren. Nice to bring special memories, of someone special to mind.
Date: 1/5/2019 9:10:00 PM
Ah, I can totally recall my own dad (RIP) in so many of these lines. Nicely done.
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 1/5/2019 9:13:00 PM
Thank you, Ed. I appreciate your comment. Glad I could bring a memory to mind. My dad's name was Edward!
Date: 1/5/2019 8:34:00 PM
the strong silent type like John Wayne. They are becoming more and more a thing of the past. Men are getting more girly now! Anyway, I quite enjoyed this portrait of your dad.
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 1/5/2019 8:51:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, he was a man's man. I agree, strength was a given in past generations. It is a sad loss, however it has come about.

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