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A Question of Priorities

Outside, the night was rainy and grey a blustery wind from the north blew cold. Inside the coup it was light as day; cozy and warm, and the light glowed gold. The Chickens content as they settled for night; looking forward to getting a good night’s rest. Suddenly strangers appeared in the light; standing in the cold, all soaked and stressed. A Coyote mother with two young pups seeking refuge from the storm they left behind. “My neighbor Chickens can you put us up; the night is cold; would you be so kind?” Weary of her motives, the rooster has fears; to the hen he says, “We must beware; a Coyote in the henhouse could lead to tears. We have much to lose; we must take care.” With compassion the hen looks to the door; she can feel the mother’s dire situation. To the rooster says, “They’re wet to the core; we’ve been given much; we must share our station.” Today our country is faced with the same; refugees at the door trying not to fall. Do we let them in and share our claim, or do we turn our backs and build a wall?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/1/2018 12:16:00 PM
I really liked this one very much. .somewhere it touches
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/1/2018 12:38:00 PM
Thank you, Debjani, I’m glad this one touched you, I appreciate you taking the time to read some of my older posts. All the best. John
Date: 1/6/2018 10:29:00 PM
Very well penned and it's a haunting question. I have my opinions....
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/7/2018 6:49:00 AM
I am very torn on this question. I went to an ultra conservative college and I am conservative by nature and yet I was taught by the Jesuits, one of the most liberal order of priests, in high school. I don’t know what the answer is and apparently congress doesn’t either.
Date: 11/4/2017 1:48:00 PM
This poem use of analogy intertwined with the short poetic story is very beautifully written. I enjoyed reading this very much for it has great underlying political imagery. Your way of stating in a mini poem the point of view and direction you were wanting to make made it much more rewarding to understand from your writers mind.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/4/2017 3:10:00 PM
Kristina, thanks for your comments, I’m glad you enjoyed. My intention when I wrote this was to do so from a completely neutral standpoint, however I have been told that it was anything but neutral. Perhaps in the future I will steer clear of any write with a political overtone. Thanks again for your kind comments. John

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