A Profound Achievement

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A Profound Achievement a profound achievement feeds the soul with enduring fruits of its endeavor- but how soon emptiness gnaws- when just ephemeral praise is devoured. Sandra M. Haight Form: Lind68868 A Comparative Thought - a comparison, even if slight, must be seen/made 5 lines of verse, syllable count, 6,8,8,6,8

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Constance La France

Date: 5/21/2019 2:03:00 AM

Sandra, your poem is quite wonderful, I am so sorry you forgot to enter because it surely would have placed. Don't feel too bad though, I have done things like that too!

Sandra Haight
Date: 5/22/2019 7:12:00 PM

Thanks so much, Constance, for your lovely, uplifting comment. I appreciate your empathetic, kind comment! Hugs, Sandra

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 5/15/2019 8:42:00 AM

Nice take on the contest, Sandra. Sure to rank high.

Sandra Haight
Date: 5/15/2019 10:09:00 PM

Thank you very much, Subimal! Your visit and lovely comment are much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra