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A Pretty Face

a pretty face has haunted my mind all day today hundreds of times yesterday she sat next to me it captured my attention to a certian degree and today i wondered what could it mean i lost myself with in her dream my thoughts have now turned into schemes what to say and what this means six more days untill i see her and i wonder if she'll be more clearer if she intended to be more dearer like a child with a dream yet i still am it's not a new thing it's as old as i am infactuation or what ever it is something inside me that i let live what will i do with it, i have to choose it's part of the game i can win or lose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/2/2012 4:06:00 AM
It is amazing what a pretty face can do, i know been there, and lost. brilliant poem. harry
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Date: 12/5/2011 7:19:00 PM
I want to know how it all turned out! don't leave me hanging like that John, you write such a romantic poem and would like to know if you did win or lose! Lizzy
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John Loving Iii
Date: 10/19/2012 10:42:00 AM
I lost. But it's still a work in progress as always
Date: 9/28/2011 4:13:00 AM
this is really a gem...words just flow out from ur pen...wonderful again !
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Date: 9/11/2011 6:08:00 PM
Congrats John on your narrative being featured. Vince
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John Loving Iii
Date: 9/11/2011 8:49:00 PM
thanks Vince, last week this was featured on page five. . i'm just glad that i made it to the front page this time. john
Date: 9/11/2011 5:30:00 PM
Excellent work to be featured on HomePage...Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/6/2011 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week John iii. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2011 11:43:00 AM
CONGRATS JOHN ON YOUR FEATURED POEM THIS WEEK ON PS.. MOST WONDERFUL WRITE TO SHARE LUV.. THANKXX FOR YOUR VERY SWEET COMMENTS ON MY POETRY TOO..
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Date: 8/15/2011 3:52:00 PM
Just a few poems here John on your site. Did you take them off? The game of love -you win some and lose some. Nice poem. love phyl
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Date: 8/15/2011 1:00:00 AM
This must be the poem you where talking about,,,.How Are you John?Me i'm just stopping by to say hi and catch up on some of my reading. Love the meaning one can give another when it comes to reading poetry. Have yourself a wonderful evening & take care,.. Linda
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Date: 8/14/2011 10:15:00 PM
Dear John, Sometimes the hunt is more fun than the prize! I love the way the story ends as you sum it up so succintly.
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Date: 8/3/2011 10:51:00 PM
Sounds like the love bug bit you!! So where did you say that rapture poem was? I can't seem to find it. this was a very nice poem. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/20/2011 8:19:00 PM
Love in its early stages is indeed intrigueing. I was surprised to find but one poem in your listing, John. Starting over? My list is getting pretty unwieldly, that may be the way to go. Thanks for your kind comments. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/20/2011 5:50:00 PM
Dear John, you have me wondering who this woman is. Very compelling poem. I hope you have found true love. What happened to all of your other poems? I just returned from a trip and sent you an email thanking you for the lovely birthday card. You are so sweet to remember me. God bless you, love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/20/2011 8:08:00 AM
such sweet desire spilling on this page, john... live and love!.. smashin! :) hugggs, nette
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Date: 7/20/2011 3:26:00 AM
Really nicely done my friend. Beautifully told and easily read and understood. Really good flow and imagery. Altogether a very enjoyable read. Good job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/18/2011 6:53:00 PM
lovely lilting lines ..so romantic and so emotion filled John.. infactuation plagues us all now and then..enjoy it as it comes luv..
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Date: 7/18/2011 2:29:00 PM
Interesting view inside the mind of a man maybe a woman also...Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by...Your kind review of my work is much appreciated...Sara
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