A Prayer At 48

It's not death I am afraid of,
it's the dying, 

not loss of life, 
but loss of life with them. 

I strain to see, with trembling faith, 
peering as thru a dusty porthole the heaven promised by you -- 
untouched forevermore by this enemy; pain, sadness, and loss. 

So I plead, 
let each suffering moment be
like stinging fertilizer, like consuming wildfire, like bitter remedy.  

Yes! Let it be as such things, 
the fruit of which is newness of life!  

Abundant life.  

And remind me often,  
I go where you have already been, 
and where you travel yet again...

with me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 7:58 AM
A great write, Brian! Intense! Congrats!
Brian Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 6:32 AM
Thank you :-)
Gauthier Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 6:50 AM
Lovely. Congrats on your fine win.
Brian Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 6:32 AM
Much appreciated!
George   Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 5:58 AM
What a prayer! Many congrats on your win Brian. Sincerely, Elaine
Brian Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 6:22 AM
And you as well! Thank you.
Gentry Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 5:22 AM
Congratulations on your placement. Well done.
Brian Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 6:19 AM
Thank you Susan.
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