A Pond's Melody
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6/8/2025 for SHOW ME A CHOKA Poetry Contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud
I'm hurt. I recoil.
In my chest, my feelings boil.
I go out to take a look -
ripples and a rook.
I feel calmer now to see
...and hear a pond's melody.
Copyright © David Crandall | Year Posted 2025
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