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A Poet’s Syntax on Trial

"A poet is, before anything else, a person who is passionately in love with language." (W. H. Auden) They sit in their glass-paneled chambers, these judges, tuning their ears to the hum of silicon— eyebrows raised at every metaphor too deft, too dressed, too drenched in sense. Who wrote this? they ask, tapping screens that blink like oracles but lie like mirrors. It is not enough now to love language. To kneel at her altar of nuance and nudge, to spend your years courting the comma or polishing an ellipsis like a saint’s bone. Critics will ask for proof of fingerprints, demand your syntax be sworn in blood or misspelled, at least, with mortal joy. Once, we wrote for the ear of the gods, now we write under the eye of machines— unblinking, unforgiving, measuring iambs with a ruler of code. So, what’s a poet to do but keep singing anyway? To light a match knowing the algorithm may call it arson? The reader may flinch, the checker cry "fraud," but somewhere, perhaps, in a heart not made of glass or gears, the flame might still be warm enough to burn A.I. and to prove you were here.

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Date: 6/20/2025 2:38:00 PM
Wow, I totally enjoyed reading your poem, Mickey....it was a creative take on AI and its impact on poets. I especially liked: in a heart not made of glass or gears, the flame might still be warm enough to burn A.I. and to prove you were here. AI will not destroy the creative spirit! I believe that! yellow rose
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Mickey Grubb
Date: 6/20/2025 4:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Yellow, for your kind, supportive comments and observations. Keep writing from and guided by your heart and soul. That's all that matters.
Date: 6/19/2025 9:40:00 AM
Fear not, Poet ~ no judge, silicon or AI can usurp a flaming resonating Heart... language misspelled, unmeasured & unsyntaxed will forever live rebellious at poet’s fingertips or lashing tongue. that is it’s very purpose. High frequency light your way.
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Mickey Grubb
Date: 6/19/2025 12:17:00 PM
Thank you, Ghairo, for your generous and kindred words. You’ve captured exactly what I hoped to honor: that rebellious spark of the poetic voice, unbound by code or convention. May we keep casting our lines like spells—sometimes misspelled, always ablaze. We write not to be approved—we write to be felt. Your light met mine, and I’m grateful for it.

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