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If I do not write Will you forget I exist? I’m more than my words Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/27/2013 9:47:00 AM
Very meaningful and moving piece. I love this one so the good news is its been added to my favourites.
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Date: 10/22/2013 8:41:00 AM
I think you had a very good day when you produced this little batch of haiku/questionku!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/22/2013 12:36:00 PM
:) I was on a roll, I guess....Thanks, Andrea for giving them a read.
Date: 10/21/2013 8:45:00 AM
I love and agree with Drakes comment.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/22/2013 12:31:00 PM
Thanks, Richard...I'm going to be naughty and give this right back at you with.....Check my response to Drake! ;) Same for you!!!
Date: 10/21/2013 12:39:00 AM
In the words of Nat King Cole: "Unforgettable, in every way..." Meanwhile, make good memories today...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/22/2013 12:30:00 PM
That's why, darling, it's incredible That someone so unforgettable Thinks that I am unforgettable too!!! :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/22/2013 12:29:00 PM
I LOVE THAT SONG!!! AMAZING! Here is the link....http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MKCyUe4syc4...Natalie singing a "duet" with him...He is projected on the screen What an amazing duo....I love Natalie Cole..Have you heard her "PINK CADILLAC" That songs makes me go wild!!!! Or her "MISS YOU LIKE CRAZY"....Ok, I've gone clear gone off the subject. Thanks for the lovely post, my dear...My response?
Date: 10/20/2013 6:23:00 PM
Believe me my little Desert Orchid, you are unforgettable but remember this, one day it will only be your words that exist, make them count. Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/22/2013 12:19:00 PM
Hmmmmmm Mr Seal...You are very serious of late. Where is the banter and the teasing??? Auntie needs to do some more hand slapping. I'm in uncharted waters when you go all serious on me here. One day only my words will exist...WHEN I'm SIX FEET UNDER!!!! Oh...I want to be cremated....claustrophobic, you know...The idea of a box...yikes! I know I'll be asleep...(yes, that is my belief...no soul flying off to heaven, hell, or purgatory...a sweet unconsciousness like sleep...Biblical proof to go with that!) however, the thought still disturbs me. I want to be sprinkled in nature. My words are out there. Others must make them count, my dear Sir.
Date: 10/20/2013 5:23:00 PM
very interesting. sometimes i feel like i am only my words...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/21/2013 8:52:00 AM
And sometimes, I think others are only their words...Yes, it is strange, isn't it? Words are way too powerful where I am concerned. ;) Thanks for the visit, my dear..........
Date: 10/20/2013 3:08:00 PM
I know just how you feel. Good poem
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/21/2013 8:51:00 AM
:) Thanks for understanding, Justice.
Date: 10/20/2013 1:38:00 PM
Dear Eileen,The wealth of words pales before the treasure of feelings! Marvelous!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/21/2013 8:49:00 AM
My dear poet, you are always a breath of fresh air....always, you bring a smile. Ti boro na sou po? Then exo logia....Efkharisto....filakia