A Poet's Happy Dream

I found myself against a willow propped.
The stones nearby me were a hundred-fold.
and one by one I tossed them as they plopped
into a rill while other pebbles rolled,
as if with one accord, away from me.

Their hundred ripples bubbled sweet champagne.
I drank. . . and then I tasted poetry.
saw flowers dance, and nothing was mundane!
Elysian then became the air I breathed.
The sun glowed purplescent.  Hocus-pocus!
I lay in greenest green while music wreathed
the meadow, lulling me. . . till I lost focus.

I woke to dusk and that inquietude
that ever shadows my dark solitude.


 Honorable Mention poem
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Watt Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 10:47 AM
Great sonnet about finding poetry. Amazing imagery floods our soul, but without it, dark solitude. Beautifully written ~ John
Gauthier Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 9:38 PM
A delightful poem, Andrea. Well done. Congrats.
Barden Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 8:31 PM
Warm regards and congrats on a well-deserved Honorable Mention, Andrea - blessings as always, my friend! :-)
Yvonne Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 9:53 PM
You love writing sonnets. The form loves you. You write it with ease. Another superb write. As all of your poems I read this too I fav. Because you are my favorite poet.
Nehls Avatar
June 17, 2014 at 3:01 AM
This is a very descriptive and wonderful sonnet. such a beautiful place for solitude.... Robert.
Oyewole Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 2:30 PM
congrats... Love it~ A.O
May Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 10:20 AM
beautiful write...congrats on your win...fav
Hunter Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 6:10 AM
Dreamy for sure!..Love it and Congrats!
A   Avatar
March 21, 2013 at 9:32 PM
Hi Andrea, Congratulations, with your winning poem. Thank you for supporting my "Green" contest. Always :-) Linda
Horsman Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 3:33 PM
love this, but then what else would i expect, from the best sonnet writer on the planet...
Brown Avatar
October 11, 2011 at 10:11 AM
Congratulations on your poetry placing in Brian's contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 7:33 PM
Congrats on your win..Oh the taste of sweet victory.Sara
Beadnall Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 3:02 PM
Nice one Andrea, i really like this poem,blessings from Paul.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 11:07 AM
Congrats Andrea on another great win with this beautiful entry my friend.. awesome as always .. touching all poets luv..
Poet Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 6:26 AM
Must be a winner!Congrats!But how to know the ranking?---kashinath
Mehta Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 8:41 PM
Congrats for dreaming happily. I enjoyed it.
Villarosa Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 12:16 AM
I love this sonnet, all about solitude and the triumph of finding a way to happiness with poetry. Congratulations, Andrea. (^_^) Noel.
Richards Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 10:47 AM
What a lovely dream....I enjoyed this winning poem so much!! Congratulations!! Love, Carrie
White Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 3:43 AM
A dream of pure bliss, Thanks for sharing it Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 8:22 PM
Big congrats on your HM in the I Dreamed contest.. a wonderful write and excellent honor for u to so enjoy as u walk to the winners circle for another trip for your great writes..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Johnson Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 6:47 PM
This was a great read. Congratulations on placing with it. Joyce
Culverhouse Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 5:06 AM
enjoyed reading today...you need to write me something new. :)
Tugaff Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 1:12 PM
Wonderful dream, wonderful imagery. Congratulations. Ernilando
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 3:18 PM
Andrea, this is outstanding and proves your shining talent for writing Sonnets. I really hope this one does well in the contest as it is certainly deserving of winning. Blessings, Connie
Fraser Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 5:33 AM
Wonderful dream you describe in your fine words Andrea >> good luck in Constances contest >> Soup Mail for you >> James
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