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A Poem I Offer To My Lady

The sea for me, it's a flood of salt that sweetens my vision ... The sun is an eruption of heat that makes the fresh morning born in my life ... Heaven is a flood in blue that colors me of enthusiasm ... and your body is the universe where I live safely, where I plant myself and fruit my perpetuity...!

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Date: 3/7/2021 12:42:00 PM
Hello Alakas, this is a cute love. you created . Salute Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/9/2021 12:32:00 PM
Hello Alakas, yes love must be cultivated to last. I believe this in eternity and it would be worthy. Alakas it is a good point of view. Salute Darlene my dear friend.
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Date: 3/8/2021 12:01:00 PM
A great Brazilian poet said: That love is eternal while it lasts! Love is a plant, a flower, it has to be cultivated to last ... we must believe in this eternity, otherwise it would not be worthy... That is my pointer of view ! salute dear, alkas
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/8/2021 11:02:00 AM
Hello Alakas. is this love a strong bond between two people? Or is it something that won't last? Is it a relationship or fascination between two people? Salute Darlene. Thank you my dear friend Alakas.
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Date: 3/7/2021 5:07:00 PM
Thank you dear ! Love is ALWAYS cute. And a lover must receive all caress a lover could donate...This m simple and common way i offer to the one i love.... Good Night And Nice DREAMS my Sweet friend... salute alkas

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