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A Poem About Hate

This whole poem is all about hate Like I hate to say goodbye Or I hate the fact I'm not with you Every moment, you and I I hate it when other men look at you Hate to have to share you at all I'd like to lock you up in a dungeon In a castle with twenty foot walls Think I'm greedy well maybe I am Hate to admit it but it's true Want you all to myself all the time On my mind every day through Hate it when other guys look at you You're all mine and mine alone Go ogle some other guy's woman My hatred is very well known The hate that I feel is caused by love Don't ever want to say goodbye This burning love is so overwhelming My hatred just intensifies © Jack Ellison 2014 HA! Fooled you!!!

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Date: 3/4/2014 8:27:00 AM
Great twisting of words Jack.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/4/2014 4:15:00 PM
Though I'd fooled ya! LOL
Date: 3/3/2014 8:36:00 AM
Oh! Oh! Your Dragon side is showing! Do I have to come up there, and spank you, my dear friend! Hate is such an awful word. as I tell Dragon all the time. And if you don't let Cathie out, you won't know if she'll come back! And as I tell Dragon every day... it's not nice to hoard a living thing! And if you let them loose and they come back... They might actually have groceries in their hand! Well, Honestly! It works for a young Dragon! Even if the Trolls do all the shopping! Silly Dragon! LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/3/2014 8:40:00 AM
At my age, I'm having a little more trouble getting around... sooo Cathie does a lot of the shopping! So far so good, she still keeps coming back!!! LOL XOXOX
Date: 3/2/2014 8:14:00 AM
Yeah fooled us..You did : )...Yes that kind of passionate love which makes us not want to share the one We love..Lovely!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/2/2014 8:28:00 AM
I see you got the meaning of love... not ever wanting to share! Fooled you with the title, eh! LOL Love you sweet lady! XOX

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