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A Poem

As I wondered what I should write And floundered in my own confusion I thought – why not write about poems That set me thinking what poems are A poem could be anything, we know At best it is distilled thoughts put into rhyme Or a moment caught in time A window glimpse into the world An engrossing passion’s ardent curl A snap shot of scenes from Nature- wild Or a slice of life, birth or death Sometimes it could be a yearning Or an image long hung on a pole A thought turned inside out Or the emptying of a mind about to spill It could be the liberation of a fancy For long held in thralldom A gnawing pain, long suppressed Or a secret, never divulged As I pondered over the subjects’ enormity And a poem’s vast scope, I asked myself- ‘Why hesitate?’ Soon I felt a stir inside, My thoughts broke loose And a terrible block lifted off my head My silence became audible I embroidered these thoughts Into the pattern of a poem Here it is before you, have a look at it Will it annoy you or will you enjoy!
Placed First A Strand (1070) Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/12/2022 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Valsa. Hugs ~ Debra
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Valsa George
Date: 2/13/2022 5:17:00 AM
Debra, I have no words to thank you enough ! You have found time to read so many of my poems and you are always up with lovely words of encouragement for me ! Stay blessed sweet friend !
Date: 2/11/2022 3:32:00 PM
The birth of a poem. Beautiful Valsa. Congratulations on your first place win. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/11/2022 3:04:00 PM
and there you have it. how a poem is born. Lovely!!
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Date: 2/11/2022 12:13:00 PM
I think this ought to be used as an educational primer--that sets one thinking what poems are...I love it!
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Date: 2/11/2022 4:25:00 AM
A splendid creative writing dear, Valsa. You have a chosen the right theme and yyyyan exceptional wording: I hope this will be selected as POTD. I loved these three verses: My silence became audible I embroidered these thoughts Into the pattern of a poem// blessings dear friend.
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Date: 2/10/2022 11:04:00 PM
Yes! I enjoyed it Valsa! Congrats!
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Date: 2/10/2022 9:02:00 PM
This gem could - actually should - be POTD. 'Course, all depends on the almighty algorithm. :) gw
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Date: 2/10/2022 5:53:00 PM
Dear Valsa, Enjoyed the poem. Outstanding write. It was an insight on how a poet thinks about poetry. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 2/10/2022 5:00:00 PM
Dear Valsa, You have found the best theme to write about, using touching vocabulary, and excellent lines and phrases like, "A gnawing pain, long suppressed Or a secret, never divulged", "Or a slice of life, birth or death". Kudos to you. Love and warm wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 2/10/2022 10:45:00 AM
Most of us delve into what a poem is and why we are blocked so mischievously from writing an adequate one. Sometimes the muse, like a fuse burns and explodes…poems all around. Other times the muse keeps blowing out our ink as the embers refuse to light.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/10/2022 9:04:00 PM
'The muse, like a fuse...' TNT ('Course, who asked me?)
Date: 2/10/2022 5:33:00 AM
Your inspiration shines through your words, Valsa. I like the themes you explored in this splendid, creative write.
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Date: 2/10/2022 3:38:00 AM
"an image long hung on a pole," seems singularly original. I like it ... Will research it, even thanking U for a great summary of what our art does. Shalom shalom dear Sis VG
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Date: 2/10/2022 3:01:00 AM
Thoroughly enjoyable. I wish I could get some sort of spark that leads to a great poem.
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