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A Plastic Bag On My Head

You know what it feels like, with a plastic bag on your head, how you struggle to breathe, your lungs start to beg. Panic builds up inside, instinctively you fight back, trying to rip this bag off you want to survive. Time slows down, every second hurts, in and out on conscious thought, trying to figure a way out. Well welcome to my world, where anxiety thrives, a plastic bag on my head, is what it feels like. Contest: Paper or plastic - Susan Burch M.Mahauariki © 2012 2nd Place
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Gorelick Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 7:59 PM
This is a great write..Im sorry about your anxiety..have some of that myself and it aint pretty. Congrats on your win. BG
Song Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 6:23 AM
You created a strong sense of panic in this reader...excellent poem...
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 5:57 AM
Congratulations Murray a sad piece xx
Sweetheart Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 8:45 PM
congrats Muurray on a fantastic write and win luv..
A   Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 7:07 PM
MURRY... congratulations! In SUSAN'S contest....Enjoyed stopping by to view may winners tonight!! Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
Ronthorpe Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 4:55 PM
Murray, wonderful work, my friend. Congrats on making Susan's winners' list.....................S.Ronthorpe
Susan Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 2:17 PM
Congratulations on your win and thanks for supporting my contest! Nicely described!
Brown Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 10:57 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Paper Or Plastic" contest Murray. Love, Carol
Magee-Dittberner Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 10:05 PM
Breathing into a plastic bag = suffocation. Breathing into a paper bag = stress relief. Funny how that works.
Dietrich Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 7:49 PM
Hey, finally I found someone who talked about plastic bags on the head!! I did that too, in half of my limericks. Nice reading your poems tonight, Muzz.
Fox Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 2:16 PM
Very good piece ! OK when you put it on your own head Enjoy ! Better done by by Mr Pol Pot and his bands, they tied nicely by your hands !
Kearley Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 1:36 PM
Very nice Muzz! It flows nice~~
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