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A Picture of Time

Observe the children running towards the water trailing their long shadows, the gold crinkled tops of waves, hesitating, then breaking into foam, the blessings of last light on her face, the sun easing into a simmering sea, bloated, slowly devouring itself to death.

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Date: 3/30/2023 4:11:00 PM
My porch faces the west and sunsets are the evening entertainment. For me it is always bittersweet. The passing of another day yet the thrill of the beauty but always peaceful. i enjoyed reading your thoughts today, Paul. Be well my friend.
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/31/2023 5:01:00 AM
Thanks Daniel. Sounds as you have the perfect position to watch the evening entertainment ...all free. Enjoy. Cheers mate.

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