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A Perfect Pollock

An abstract creation on our window pane, just for a short moment- a river of rain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/11/2010 6:13:00 PM
Sometimes, I just love to watch the rain, hitting the windows.. you captured a beautiful moment.. love constance.. by the way.. soup mail!!!!
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Date: 4/10/2010 10:52:00 AM
Nice way with words Brian... I luv rain.. its a great mood thinker... so enjoyed another creative write from your talented hand..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/10/2010 9:17:00 AM
enjoyed--fun write
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Date: 4/10/2010 9:09:00 AM
There is beauty in these sheeting rains that resemble an abstract painting.....Great idea and great presentation...Sara
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