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A Perfect Day to Learn We took our late lunch in a wooden cabin at the foot of the mountain where exotic foods in sumptuous meal were served. I enjoyed immensely the fried fish and the native chicken soup which were so familiar like sort of foods I immensely enjoyed few years back in my country. While nibbling daintily, I enjoyed the ambiance and the panorama of the long, wild river. After an hour of lunch and rest, we all set off canoeing. I didn’t have any plan to join since I was aquaphobic but my friends’ enthusiasm was such a magnetic pull on me and so, I joined. first time to paddle not clever I remember it swivels, jerks side to side drives crazily, wild My colleague and I were first timers, so we’d a hard time to maneuver and paddled along with the flow from upstream. Usually, we got struck or overtaken by other canoes nor stocked somewhere on big rocks and when part of the river was shallow, one of us had to get off to redirect it. The river was eight kilometers long, winding through the verdant mountains and forest and no one could find a grassy river bank unless one had to reach its end. let’s sing rowing songs when we’re exhausted and bored no rescue will come along go on with the flow At a moment, we lost direction and capsized at one side of the river, so deep that we could not reach the bottom. My friend plunged herself at the speeding canoe passing by to save herself. In a while, I was left hanging, gripping tightly the vines of willow tree at the side of the river. Another friend of mine passed by and she asked for rescue. A man from Satun helped me out and we swam back to my canoe. I found myself paddling again. now alone I go taking the flight and risks paddle a boat side to side strength will amplify Singing and rowing I went on although running water pushed me away to the side or kept me stranded sometimes. I just kept alerting everyone with scream to drive away my fear and draw courage. At last my friend saw me passing by and she joined me once again. Despite muscle pains, we paddled alternately, racing and catching the late afternoon time. When we were at the river bank, we walked together back to the cabin feeling exhausted and hungry. In long silence, we smiled and raised our thumbs gesturing “okay”. July 20, 2016 11.25am -not for a contest. just a try of haibun, i'm not good at prose but i wrote this as my souvenir from my unforgettable experience 3 yrs ago. hope i've another chance to experience this again.

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Date: 7/15/2017 12:16:00 AM
What a harrowing experience capsizing on the river. I can swim but the thought of that happening in a canoe has kept me from ever getting in one. Nearest I have come is a catamaran or a row boat. You are very brave to have had such an experience Leonora and logging this in a journal makes for exciting reading and makes an excellent haibun. I believe you need the three line haiku instead of the four line verse though for it to be a true haibun. I thoroughly enjoyed this wonderful piece! : )
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Date: 7/23/2017 1:56:00 AM
Hello my very dear poet friend, Connie. Thank you so much for coming by to read some of my poems. I'm so sorry again for the late read and reply on your comment. I was always short of time and always in a hurry 'cuz of unexpected deluge of works or some appointments. Just dropping by a while here to greet our dear friend Annelise on her birthday today. But, I'll be back again so soon "coz I'll be leaving after 30 min, 2.30pm here for a very important appointment at 3pm and another at 6pm. I appreciate so much for sharing your thoughts and your precious time to visit me and enjoying my humble work. Hugs and hugs to you from me. I'll be back to visit you soon ok. TYTYSSSM and more blessings.
Date: 10/17/2016 9:35:00 AM
Haibuns are meant to be a travel thing. And in these you have travelled far and wide.
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Date: 10/18/2016 1:11:00 AM
Your wonderful feedback is so much appreciated sir! It'll inspire me more to write this time. You're my number 1 mentor of haibun sir. You're a blessing to me. God bless! Khapkohn ka mak mak na kha...
Date: 7/30/2016 10:55:00 PM
Brought back wonderful memories of my wife and I canoeing at Wakiva springs. She died in2009 and your poem restored this memory for me.Thank you for such an awesome gift.
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Date: 9/6/2016 11:07:00 AM
Thank you so much for your wonderful visit and nice comment my dear friend, Michael. I'm so sorry to hear about your great loss and your pain. But wonderful mem'ries are forever great treasures to keep especially from loved ones. May God bless you always! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
Date: 7/21/2016 4:23:00 PM
This was such a pleasant experience, Leonora! I'd have enjoyed that canoe trip on the river! It was not danger free, but you make light of the difficulties you encountered. Hugs and take care. // paul
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Date: 7/23/2016 9:59:00 PM
Indeed my dear friend, Paul. However, I want to rectify my flaw about the place i've mentioned. I'm sorry. I checked out again our old itinerary list and it was at Satun province not Trang oh my...lol, my sign of aging. 'though i've been at Trang before and visited a cave. Thanks a lot for stopping by. Have a great wkend! Hugs!
Date: 7/21/2016 4:27:00 AM
Excellent. Great experience with wonderful story. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 7/23/2016 10:53:00 PM
Thank you as well my dear friend Ravi for stopping by. But may I rectify my error on the information/place please. My place of adventure was at Satun not Trang. I'm sorry, I've interchanged the places because these provinces have almost the same kind of tourist attractions like mountains, and caves. Sorry for a lil confusion. TYTYSM for coming by. Have a great wkend! Hugs!
Date: 7/20/2016 12:08:00 PM
- What experience .... I would have been terrified - Together you did it !!! - Glad it ended well, even though you were very tired - A lovely poem and a wonderful story dear friend Leonora - Best wishes and many hugs from Norway // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/23/2016 10:57:00 PM
It was indeed an unforgettable great experience my dear friend, Anne and I did it. Full of muscle/body pains the following days :)) but was great coz I learned. But I am so sorry for the wrong info. my dear friend, the place was in Satun not Trang. Sorry, coz I've interchanged these two beautiful places. TYTYSM for stopping by. Happy Birthday and Best Wishes! Hugs!
Date: 7/20/2016 1:31:00 AM
A beautiful path and day, My lovely SIS, I thank you for sharing the smiles and drawn up moment. Ha, The ending was adorable. A great experience, thank you so much for your lovely message on my phone and visit to my poem... hugs my dearest sis and BFF... LINDA
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Date: 7/23/2016 11:16:00 PM
Hello my dearest sis-BFF Linda! Hugs and many hugs to you. Thank you so much once again for the warm smiles of your visit, replies and loving support. It was indeed an unforgettable and great experience my dearest sis, however, I humbly apologize for the error of the place. It must be at Satun not Trang. I've interchanged these two coz both were mountainous..and I really forgot but I checked the old list:)). Again, TYTYSSM dearest SIS-BFF!
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Len Gasun
Date: 7/20/2016 8:29:00 AM
Thank you so much as well my dearest sis and BFF. I think i've mentioned about this to you before, when I rowed a canoe/boat and almost drowned. Thank you so much for your reply and comment. Have a great day!lots of love and hugs...

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