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A Parted Soul's Call

Oh how i've missed the dirt, how i've missed the scorching sun, how i've missed dusk, with all its dark enchant, how i've missed the birds, their singing, i lust, and you my love, since when my soul depart, await the full moon's burst, I will come, I must.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/6/2018 1:35:00 PM

Lovely, Ray.

Ray Write
Date: 6/18/2018 5:19:00 AM

Thanks so much.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/4/2018 7:57:00 PM

Hello Ray Write, this is a lovely poem. I just see the departed soul pass, as I read. have a nice evening my friend.

Ray Write
Date: 6/18/2018 5:21:00 AM

It is and I will, same as yours (evening).

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 5/4/2018 11:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your page 1 poem on featured poetry. Very nice writing.

Ray Write
Date: 6/18/2018 5:24:00 AM

Thanks Wanter, and have a good one.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 4/29/2018 10:59:00 AM

Welcome to PoetrySoup, my friend! This romantic piece is as lovely as a sunrise or the sunset! Your beloved will be very delighted! Best wishes and hugs. Pandita

Ray Write
Date: 6/18/2018 5:26:00 AM

Its an honor and always will be. Thank you and much love.