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A Paper Cup

A spider on my wall; I spied her, just inches from my head, her big fat hairy legs and body crimson-red. Soft light casts a shadow making her look larger; her high, and me below. On my desk, I see a paper cup. If I could trap her underneath it; but then, I could miss and cock-it up. She could scurry down my arm, or worse, down my neck. I pull my collar tight. "It's a quandary, alright," I curse. Spider-cup, my nerves begin to fray. Cup-spider, spider-cup: will it fit? As I think, she gently walks away. A 3-6-9 Poem Poetry Contest: Placed 2nd. Sponsored by: Emile Pinet Date wrote: 03-July-2021

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Date: 8/4/2021 12:02:00 PM
Very cute poem!! Congratulations on your win!!
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/5/2021 12:45:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 7/31/2021 7:06:00 PM
Congrats. This is a great write even though I don't like spiders. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/5/2021 12:45:00 AM
Thank you Regina for your comments.
Date: 7/31/2021 2:09:00 PM
Cute, Terry! Regardless of placement which was tremendous; your piece shines with many opposing feelings... Well done and congratulations on fine poetry.
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/5/2021 12:45:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments.
Date: 7/31/2021 9:14:00 AM
Congratulations Terry! Your poem earned "second place" in my contest, it was a very tough contest but your poem successfully caught my attention, well done my friend, Emile.
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/5/2021 12:44:00 AM
Thank you, Emile, for the placement and for running the contest; it was a fascinating exercise. I enjoyed it very much.
Date: 7/31/2021 9:12:00 AM
Wonderful Writing. Congratulations!
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/5/2021 12:34:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments
Date: 7/15/2021 4:14:00 AM
and so many relationships end this way...Nicely done Terry
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/15/2021 4:36:00 AM
Thank you, John.
Date: 7/9/2021 1:21:00 PM
I like the casual style in which you write.
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/10/2021 1:18:00 AM
Thank you, James; I appreciate that; I am trying to develop a style.
Date: 7/9/2021 2:00:00 AM
There are many who are afraid of spiders. Apart from the poisonous os, they are quite harmless. It's rats that I hate.
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/10/2021 1:17:00 AM
I don't mind spiders; that is why the poem is about catching it, not squishing it; thank you for the visit, all the best, Terry.
Date: 7/8/2021 12:01:00 PM
A pleasant read. Made me smile :)
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/9/2021 12:49:00 AM
Then it was worth writing, I love to make people smile, thank you for reading.
Date: 7/3/2021 3:58:00 AM
hi Terry i love this slice of time piece... ..the little twitchy ones make me nervous. best wishes anthony
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/4/2021 1:18:00 AM
Thank you Anthony

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