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A Pacific Gift

The bay’s color’s of living aquamarine Green and navy blend Sands painted by soft sun’s light The smell of marine life’s salty weeds One breathes in fresh bay fog Gray moist air fills the lungs Life feels heavy during difficult days Without the bay the chest Feels like cold rock Without the moist coolness Without the sun’s apricot hue The bay’s waves foaming white A sliver of the moon smiles In the early blue afternoon sky A gift to cradle this day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/19/2020 5:51:00 PM
So pretty, I love being near water and this transported me there.
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Date: 11/21/2019 1:57:00 PM
Brilliant imagery and so scenic.... great poem..
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Date: 11/21/2019 1:11:00 PM
A metaphoric write that left me with a happy feeling. Great imagery Linda!
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Linda Milgate
Date: 1/19/2020 7:16:00 PM
been out of things for a bit, but the ocean is life to me. take care.
Date: 11/21/2019 12:50:00 PM
Hi Linda. well depicted poem. I agree the pacific coast is amazing. beautiful scenery and breath taking views. Thanks for sharing this
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Linda Milgate
Date: 1/19/2020 7:15:00 PM
Thank you for thoughts and glad you enjoyed, been out of things for a bit, take care.

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