A Note In the Wind - Nw

How thrilled was I, the strings in my heart trembled, when a note floated to me in the wind, and drenched me with a fragrance I remembered from many years ago… many years ago, when a soft soothing melody along with the aroma of love drowned me in ecstasy! This is the note I was waiting for... from the memories of my past, my tender dreams which murmured like a river flowing to meet its end in the ocean. flowers which bloomed, but the quivering petals slowly drooped, never shone in its full splendour! A Note, carried by the playful Spring wind…brought me a message, whispered in my ears ... Love waits. October 26, 2022 "A Note In The Wind" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Charles Messina

Date: 11/2/2022 4:44:00 AM

So beautiful, Mala. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Blessings...Charlie

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/2/2022 4:50:00 AM

Thank you, Charles. Glad to participate.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/27/2022 7:12:00 AM

- A soft and beautiful wind, Mala ... spring is made for love - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/27/2022 7:51:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. Your comment inspires me.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/26/2022 4:06:00 PM

A beautiful poem. Well written :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/26/2022 4:15:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Heidi. It just came...without much toiling on it! And I let my imagination float wherever it goes!

Jcb Brul

Date: 10/26/2022 4:02:00 PM

Oh, this is you my friend! Floating with tenderness like the touch of a feather. Your ending line speaks it all. So lovely. Best wishes in the contest. This is a Fave!!^___^ JCB

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/26/2022 4:13:00 PM

Thank you, Dear JCB. I really wait for your sweetest comment - it inspires me. Fave! WOW! So delighted and thankful!

Bill Baker

Date: 10/26/2022 4:01:00 PM

A tender and romanic poem of what the wind carried to you. I enjoyed playfulness of the dreams of love, Mala. Thanks for sharing it with us. Smiles ~ Blessings A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/26/2022 4:12:00 PM

Thank you, Bill. This poem came carried by the wind, My Friend. I was not planning to write it! Now I love it.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/26/2022 3:20:00 PM

Great verse for the contest. Great imagery. Blessings my friend

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/26/2022 3:27:00 PM

Thank you, Eve. Your comment is precious to me!