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10/27/24

A Note in the Wind

Third place

Contest by Charles Messina

 

Contest No.1298 by Brian Strand

A NOTE IN WIND A note I wrote in wind to rewind reminiscences rippling on lost love of bygone days like shimmering Sun rays in dim twilight with faded light as evening merging to night. In last phase a note I wrote in wind to carry my last wish to meet you just to exchange glances and with regards to put a complaint how can you discard that part of life which once we spent together? Also to ask how to forget that you had won my heart? Dear, I wrote a note following your quote “ Our love is eternal surpassing time or circumstances .“ Circumstances separated us, Eternal time ignored our love. Two lone hearts to explore journey of life to terminate in death. My wishful realisation for unison on reincarnation.

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Date: 11/2/2022 4:53:00 AM
Beautiful, Anisha. Congratulations on your winning placement. Blessings...Charlie
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Date: 10/28/2022 1:45:00 PM
Anisha, your words flow like a steady breeze. And the way your formatted your poem gives a visual and visceral sense of the a note floating on the wind. Enjoyed this one. Blessings. Notes of best wishes for the contest.
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