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A Nightingale's Song

Perhaps in time, I’ll know hereby
When in deep sundown and the rain
 A nightingale brown tweets my pain;
In lone tempo, its forlorn cry.

This warbler perches on the sill
Muttering plaintive notes  for me,
 As hands fold to listen closely
To many soulful tales which chill.

How pointed beak releases grief
Trilling for the death of its mate…
  I too lost my love by stroke’s fate
That I understand our disbelief.

Comes morn, this heart needed to soar
But this dear nightingale took flight; 
 Leaving a melodic delight
Of a songbird’s new roams... to explore!


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10/16/2019
Writing Challenge, October 2019 - Bird - Poetry Contest
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Hawkens Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 7:36 AM
Wonderful poem. Beautifully written Thank you JC Hawkens
Delaney Avatar
March 5, 2020 at 11:35 AM
Hi Nette: Hope all is well. Miss-seeing your lovely presence here. Hugs, SuZ
Somadas Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 7:38 AM
Fantastic poem..rhyming as a nightingale's song.. thanks for sharing..
Rose  Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 9:23 PM
It feels good to read your excellent poetry once again Nette. xo
poemtheart Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 12:47 AM
I absolutely love this poem. It is an amazingly awesome poem. I will read it again, such a lovely poem.. :)
Gupta Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 6:38 AM
Beautifully rhythmic flow ... Exemplary free verse ... A joy to read ...
Callus Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 8:57 AM
Such a beautiful poem inspired by one of the most 'poetic' birds and its plaintive song. Your use of enclosed rhyme is also worthy of mention. ~ Hope you are keeping well! All the best for 2020. Hugs // paul
Agustin Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 11:52 PM
Kumusta na? Maligayang pasko!!! God bless you.
Mchattie Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 3:06 PM
Lovely poem my friend. No nightingales in these parts but we have our share of songbirds. Have a great day.
Sergi Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 6:07 PM
Hi nette: I saw a nightinggale once and I never forgot it's look. You restored my memory with a great poem!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 4:18 PM
A feathered cry of love, you found your own warble in this one nette, enjoyed the read and congrats my dear lady;-)
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 2:16 PM
Hello Nette, this poem is beautiful. I have never seen a nightingale, Oh just saw the photo. A small bird. Enjoyed this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
Delaney Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 8:50 AM
Beautiful expressive poem Congrats on making the top 100; you go girl. Hugzz, SuZ
Proxenos Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 10:38 AM
Hi Nette, a beautiful poem my friend - you and the bird had a sadness in common - this nightingale promoted a creative well crafted poem. Lovely dear Nette. Hugs and blessings. Jenn.
Sathasivam Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 9:16 AM
I love NIGHTINGALE birds and your poem smooth my heart with lovely verses. Thanks for sharing it
Ligon Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 1:19 PM
Beautiful imagery and parallel emotions of human and bird grief, well thought out and composed.
Theraven Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 12:43 AM
nette, My station, your's to pen, my elation, your's to begin. -Richard
Roper Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 6:29 PM
Nette, congratulations on your great win. Hugs Eve
Wolf Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 4:49 PM
Wonderfully penned, nette! Cozy and delightful!... As an Emily Dickinson fan, it brings to mind the poem, 'Hope is the thing with feathers.' Thank you, Gershon
La France Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 11:38 AM
Bette congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this appealing poem!
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 5:13 AM
such lovely imagery Nette, :-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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October 20, 2019 at 1:07 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Nette :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Wanter Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 10:43 AM
So very dear to read, and sad. Sweet identification with a little bird. Such beauty.
Proxenos Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 4:19 PM
A very lovely poem my friend - sad but so well penned - a nightingale's melodic trill but with a heavy heart! Hugs, Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 6:27 AM
A melodic write--just as sweet as the nightingale's song..well written, as always, Nette.
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