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A Nibble

They started at the break of day For happy day of fun. Each hoped to catch a mess of fish Before the day was done. They hurried to remembered spot Where they'd had past success, To cast their bait from a high wall, With some skill, more or less. These siblings wanted to surprise Their unsuspecting mom. The sweet, young miss was Eloise, (Ell-o-wise) Her brothers Jack and Tom. At first the fish refused to bite, But these three persevered. And each went home with their fair share Before sun disappeared. For Edmund Blair Leighton contest

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Date: 3/28/2013 9:32:00 PM
I like your poem Joyce... always~ Linda
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Date: 3/25/2013 2:49:00 PM
congrats for your win, Joyce, I remember how cute I thought this was.
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Date: 3/25/2013 1:37:00 PM
Happy to see this on the winners list !! Loved it then and upon the reading of it again. Time to wet them hooks !! Congrats on your win !!
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Date: 3/24/2013 7:49:00 PM
congrats on your win
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Date: 2/20/2013 11:02:00 PM
very cute, Joyce. I can understand why you chose to do this contest. I can't wait to give it a try. such wonderful pictures!
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Date: 2/20/2013 9:47:00 PM
Enjoyed this, Joyce. Brings back memories of fishing off the banks of the bayou when the kids were little. We caught more fun than fish ..
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