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A New Beginning

Snow Falling Like feathers So soft and white Lying on the ground Covering old footprints Muddied paths best forgotten Replaced by the beauty of now A clean slate for you to walk upon A new world that awaits your tomorrow Written: Jan 22, 2011

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/11/2012 4:49:00 AM

This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2011 5:37:00 AM

Congratulations Lainie on your win in the "Any Form -Theme" contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/26/2011 7:38:00 AM

Congrats Lainie on your first place win in Brian's contest with another lovely poem from your creative soul my friend..luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/28/2011 6:09:00 AM

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder and you have beheld beauty with yours to share with us...Enjoyed..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Daver Austin

Date: 1/23/2011 8:13:00 AM

Egad! A poem dealing with snow that isn't negative. Very beautiful, Lainie. I was just thinking this morning of writing a poem called, "White." I mean, like, everything white. I would also use the Etheree. What could be more deadly, frozen. Maybe I will change my mind. Love,Dave