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A Natural Transformation

She was unsure when the melding began, it was gradual A natural interface Gradual transformation Subtle and delicately done She leaned into her new form, loving her limbs the wind tickled her leaves She loved her roots Feeling them ooze into the heart of the forest.

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/23/2021 1:48:00 PM

Such a delightful poem on the transformation that takes place as the season changes. Wonderful metaphor, too, in my opinion. Good writing, Caren.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/23/2021 7:24:00 PM

Thanks Hank

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2021 9:54:00 AM

My dog is snoring really loudly next to me. it's so funny, he never used to snore. But now he has horrible allergies and he makes SO many strange noises!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/23/2021 7:25:00 PM

I have 2 dogs doing the same thing

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2021 9:53:00 AM

Oh I do love this, Caren. It reminds me a bit of this one sonnet I wrote (Strange REdemption? I forgot the exact title) anyway, your poem is awesome.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/23/2021 7:25:00 PM

Thank you Andrea

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 10/23/2021 1:28:00 AM

I wish I could lean into a new form... Lovely transformation....

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/23/2021 7:25:00 PM

Thank you Shirley