A Naked Dream

I always wanted to play chess
But not in a state of undress
My doctor was there
He tried not to stare
Then told me my body's a mess...
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Brown Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 12:07 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem Barbara in John Freeman's contest"Compromising Dreams". Love,Carol
White Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 9:51 PM
OMG embarrassing for sure- Congrats on the win
Sweetheart Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 9:22 AM
Congrats Barb on your number one win in John's contest for this unique and original write .. enjoy another biggie.. with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 9:48 PM
Hey, I am seeing lotsa good ones from this contest. CONgraulations, Barbara!
Johnson Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 9:13 PM
Congratulations on your limerick win. I think we've all had his crazy dream. Or there's another one, Using the bathroom in a public place and finding no door on the stall. Love, Joyce
Freeman Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 9:07 PM
Congratulations Babara, Haaa! seem like the most unlikely people are always there. Smile, Agape, Moses
Brumley Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 7:04 PM
Ouch! That's not good news! Who won the game? :) I just posted my first blog, you're welcomed to visit.
Kendrick Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 4:36 PM
Nightmare that went from bad to worse..Hope that it is for the contest and not real life..Sara
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 3:55 PM
Today as I read this piece you have written I am thankful that you have shared it with us. I hope you will present us with more of your poetry in the near future. Don't let your ink dry out. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Barbara. Love, Carol
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