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A Murder Mystery

Buzzing above me Whizzing through shadowy flight Stabbing fangs in skin Causing welts and itchy bites Festering plots slay these pests A Buggy Tanka Contest Sponsored by: M. L. Kiser August 21, 2021
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Laurie Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 11:16 PM
Hello Regina ... these tiny whining creatures will send you bonkers if there is not a counter attack - thank you Regina - Lindsay
Dietrich Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 5:44 PM
Murder Mystery was a great title!! I see you wrote an actual tanka. I am confused by what to do since the rules state to do three lines 17 syllables or under. In YOUR contest, do you want only one quatrain or any number of quatrains. Seeing your lovely example, I assume it can be any number of them?
Mcintosh Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 6:30 PM
You can write as many as you want for my contest, Andrea! Thanks for reading my poems :) Love you, Gina
Leffanta Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 11:15 AM
It is easy to say, "Thou shalt not kill" when one is a god, but most victims disagree. . . . .
Canerdy Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 7:07 AM
Good one, Gina! That little swatter wouldn't faze a Mississippi 'skeeter! Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 5:41 AM
LOL, when I saw this “murder mystery” was about a bug.
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