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Inspired by Kim Rodrigues' haiku, 'Everest,' posted October 27. Thank you, Kim!

May I never rest beneath the icy crest ~ of Mount Ever-Rest

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Date: 11/13/2021 7:40:00 PM
This gave me a chuckle! Cute. Your poems are so much fun to read :-)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/16/2021 7:27:00 PM
Well, if they're not fun, then I'm done! :) gw
Date: 11/1/2021 10:24:00 AM
Me either!
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Date: 10/30/2021 1:21:00 AM
Must be exhilarating to reach the top under your own steam, sadly many have perished in the attempt. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/30/2021 8:54:00 PM
Cost-benefit analysts would never take the risk, I guess. That's why they are financial guys in suits, and others are adventurers, I guess. ~ Neither, gw
Date: 10/29/2021 11:54:00 AM
Perfect welcome to every crematorium!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/30/2021 8:53:00 PM
Ha. 'Man on-the-rocks,' I guess...
Date: 10/29/2021 11:34:00 AM
Nice one, gw. I loved the image of "the icy crest." I have never remotely dreamed of climbing a mountain, so I will never rest beneath Mt. Everest!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/30/2021 8:34:00 PM
Well, you and I both. We'll never-rest under Ever-rest! Wink, wink :) gw
Date: 10/29/2021 4:36:00 AM
Ooh…love that, compadre!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/30/2021 8:33:00 PM
Smile... If I am com-padre, Can I title you 'co-madre!' More smiles... Thanks, Kim!
Date: 10/29/2021 2:54:00 AM
Somehow, reminds me of noted Frost with the serene echoic connotation! Regards
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Silpika Kalita
Date: 11/1/2021 8:38:00 PM
Lol! I mean Frost's Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/30/2021 8:50:00 PM
Frost?! Intriguing comment. Robert Frost and I attended the same college. (Dartmouth). He was voted the 3rd or 4th most influential alumnus of the past 250 years. There were 24 others on the list, including Dr. Suess (Theodore Gisell, who was #7, I think). I must have been #26. LOL! Thank you for such a generous comment, Silpika. Light and Illumination, Gershon

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