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A Morning Walk

The southern joy, I see it; a majestic piney wood; its fresh aromatic pine scent climbing my nostrils; membranes absorb its woodsy essence as I breathe deeply, it becomes part of me. Pine needle carpeting, soft upon the sandy clay, makes silent my footsteps. Above, sits an old hoot owl, framed by branches and a cloud matte. I trespass upon his world; awakening him and he hoots an order to leave him be. I spread a smile and mentally apologize as he closes his eyes again. A morning wood walk begins an inspiring day.
Written 4-15-19 For:"APRIL 2019 CONTEST 5,ANY THEME,ANY FORM,UPTO A MAX OF 12 (T W E L V E ) LINES Poetry Contest" Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 4/21/2019 11:52:00 PM
Bravo on your gold medal win, ML. Superbly done.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/22/2019 2:28:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 4/20/2019 3:30:00 PM
This is well written. Congratulations on your win.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/22/2019 2:28:00 PM
Thank you, Samuel.
Date: 4/17/2019 4:54:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this M L, your poem made me feel like I was there, a great way to start the day. Congrats on your trophy win. John
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/18/2019 2:11:00 PM
Thanks so much, John. True story.
Date: 4/17/2019 1:35:00 AM
This is exactly what a hoot owl does! "I trespass upon his world; awakening him and he hoots an order to leave him be. " Love it!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/18/2019 2:12:00 PM
They do get grumpy; it's true and thanks.
Date: 4/15/2019 10:27:00 PM
Lovely, ML!! I'm not typically a "morning person", but even I have to admit- morning walks are magical! ;)
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/16/2019 4:17:00 AM
I'm not either but, if I am around the country; I sleep well so, morning isn't a big chore like it is in the suburbs and cities. Thanks.
Date: 4/15/2019 6:42:00 PM
A very nice inspiring walk! Well written. Thanks for sharing :)
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/15/2019 7:47:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 4/15/2019 5:30:00 PM
You took me on your walk to the inspiring day..much detail and imagery..excellent write, MLK.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/15/2019 5:32:00 PM
Oh, thanks so much, Vijay.

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