A Morning Walk

The southern joy, I see it; a majestic piney wood; its fresh aromatic pine scent climbing my nostrils; membranes absorb its woodsy essence as I breathe deeply, it becomes part of me. Pine needle carpeting, soft upon the sandy clay, makes silent my footsteps. Above, sits an old hoot owl, framed by branches and a cloud matte. I trespass upon his world; awakening him and he hoots an order to leave him be. I spread a smile and mentally apologize as he closes his eyes again. A morning wood walk begins an inspiring day.
Written 4-15-19 For:"APRIL 2019 CONTEST 5,ANY THEME,ANY FORM,UPTO A MAX OF 12 (T W E L V E ) LINES Poetry Contest" Sponsor: Brian Strand
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Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 11:52 PM
Bravo on your gold medal win, ML. Superbly done.
Kiser Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 2:28 PM
Thanks so much!
Otieng Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 3:30 PM
This is well written. Congratulations on your win.
Kiser Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 2:28 PM
Thank you, Samuel.
Gondolf Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 4:54 AM
Enjoyed reading this M L, your poem made me feel like I was there, a great way to start the day. Congrats on your trophy win. John
Kiser Avatar
April 18, 2019 at 2:11 PM
Thanks so much, John. True story.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 1:35 AM
This is exactly what a hoot owl does! "I trespass upon his world; awakening him and he hoots an order to leave him be. " Love it!
Kiser Avatar
April 18, 2019 at 2:12 PM
They do get grumpy; it's true and thanks.
Mcferran Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 10:27 PM
Lovely, ML!! I'm not typically a "morning person", but even I have to admit- morning walks are magical! ;)
Kiser Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 4:17 AM
I'm not either but, if I am around the country; I sleep well so, morning isn't a big chore like it is in the suburbs and cities. Thanks.
Sands Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 6:42 PM
A very nice inspiring walk! Well written. Thanks for sharing :)
Kiser Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 7:47 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Pandit Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 5:30 PM
You took me on your walk to the inspiring day..much detail and imagery..excellent write, MLK.
Kiser Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 5:32 PM
Oh, thanks so much, Vijay.
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