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A Morning In Miniature


Carpet patterns 
and the swirlings of grain
in wooden floors were maps
to me of exotic worlds,
portal holes for a child
to enter and explore
places edged on the
furthest reaches 
of the fabulous.

Even today, as an old man,
I saw a landscape 
in miniature when morning sunlight 
came through the window
and crept across
the room, illuminating a map
in the knots and welts of grain
rolled out on the pinewood floor.

I found myself off on tour
swept into the detail
along its ravines
and imagined trails,
into its wild inland, 
the unfenced territories whose
vast subterranean caves
well far below what
can be seen, the dank
dormitories of dream.

And then, 
above the underworld,
dry plains paused 
by rocky outcrops
of doubt, the long silences 
that stretch for miles 
and curl up in corners
when evening falls.
The star pitted dark hung
with mystery, morse
for the mystic,

until a sober perspective
shrank the sublime
back into a smaller space
to fit ordinary sight
and became
the comforting familiarity 
of a well trodden 
wooden floor, aged, uneven,
basking in the morning's 
honeyed light.

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Date: 2/24/2024 5:26:00 AM
"Dank dormitories of dream." That's about as clever a line of alliteration can be. Having grown up on a farm, I know the territories we can explore in a barn or a field. Vast and wonderful is the imagination of a child, and so are our memories as we age.
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/24/2024 4:38:00 PM
That line came out of the blue...had to grab it quickly and write a poem to encase it in. Your comments Dear Lin also encase the wise observations of a fellow practitioner...savoured as usual. Take care...

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