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she licks her lips during appetizers. . . how can he wait for dessert?

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Jack Horne

Date: 8/26/2017 2:47:00 PM

Ha ha, love this

B.E. Singer

Date: 8/9/2017 4:09:00 PM

watch out for too much "likker."

B.E. Singer

Date: 8/9/2017 4:08:00 PM

Why, at dessert, will his tongue jump out and wiggle?? good mind picture.

Pat Adams

Date: 8/9/2017 7:59:00 AM

I think she is dessert!!! Amazing powerful and erotic especially for 1 line!!

Dean Wood

Date: 8/7/2017 9:27:00 AM

This shows an amazing understanding of the male makeup. The short answer is -- he won't! Very nice! -- Dean

Augustus Black

Date: 8/1/2017 10:57:00 AM

Short puzzling stuff. Astounding single line.

Moon Flower

Date: 7/31/2017 11:01:00 PM

Now, I'm about to mimic this by just imagining how it should have ended... ;)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/31/2017 9:58:00 PM

love this lushes Monoky, Andrea ~*

Supraja Kannan

Date: 7/30/2017 10:37:00 AM

Brilliant Andrea...

Robert Johnson

Date: 7/29/2017 8:42:00 PM

Breath takingly delicious. :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/29/2017 2:13:00 PM

Hi Andrea, I liked how you combined the two forms. It was good appetizer in this sizzling hot piece. Well done:-) Alexis

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/29/2017 12:38:00 PM

Hello Andrea, what a nice appetizer :) So you liked my Fireflies in the garden poem. It was a razor blade :) just to make sure everyone reading, I put not my mom. I posted a new poem I wrote last night :),,,,, I should write some like this. I hardly think of one liner as poems :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/29/2017 12:00:00 PM

Good one..Enjoyed reading your today..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/29/2017 3:42:00 AM

Cleverly and Very sensually said. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/28/2017 3:43:00 PM

lol! thanks for sharing.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/28/2017 12:40:00 PM

...I had to come back to giggle some more, and fave it :) xomo!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/28/2017 11:03:00 AM

True! He must be a saint to wait for that long dear, Andrea! haha! Very witty!

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/28/2017 9:54:00 AM

Very nice poem! It reminds me of a time when I has a pretty Jewish girlfriend at the age of 19. Would not be bad to be 19 again. I have some more poems coming out in a number of publications. I wrote one recently called "City Heat". Hope you and yours are in good health!! Peace & Love Matthew Anish