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Poem written for and submitted to “A Monk With No God” poetry contest, Unseeking Seeker, sponsor, September 23, 2025

A MONK WITH NO GOD

A MONK WITH NO GOD ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Line of inquiry: “a homogeneous mass of consciousness, God as the all there is, mind cannot name, being both immanent and transcendent, living light intimate in heart aflame.” not a god of names, but the hum holding the cosmos together the petrichor scent after rain the miracle of conception and birth the hummingbird’s beating heart the quiet between my thoughts, as close as my own heart the vastness between planets it does not answer prayer it is the prayer a homogenous mass? only to the mind that tries to comprehend it.
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Miller Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 1:25 AM
Congratulations Sara for your top three placement with this wonderful poem
Gauthier Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 8:52 PM
beautiful ~ god is the universe indeed
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 6:01 PM
thanks for your visit and insightful comment
DiMino Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 9:06 PM
Lovely writing! When prayer is done right...it is less a dialogue...and more spiritual communion with God in His universe.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 6:02 PM
thank you, Joe, for that comment...that's what I was hoping to communicate. enjoy your evening, Sara
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