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Haiku - a Moment

of silent wet dawn a bird trill . . . rain falls with thunder __________________ May 26, 2018 Poetry/Haiku/a moment Copyright Protected, ID 1026-150-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/28/2018 2:38:00 PM
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wonderful, sweetie. I need to get going on this one! you nailed it.
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J.W. Earnings
Date: 5/28/2018 4:43:00 AM
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Love how you followed the title with the poem. So witty to do so! (: Really nicely written... Thank you for sharing. So good! -JWE
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 5/26/2018 4:34:00 PM
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You have captured this early-dawn moment when the bird sings just before the storm. It is that way here; birds grow anxious just before the thunder begins. A remarkable haiku, my friend. Best wishes in Maureen's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Constance La France
Date: 5/27/2018 6:00:00 AM
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Thank you Carolyn, you saw in my haiku exactly what I wanted to convey. We have nice temperatures here in Canada but lots of rain and thunder storms. I love just before the storm, when there is a serenity.
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 5/26/2018 1:55:00 PM
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I can hear the bird as I read. Marvelous moment, Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/27/2018 6:02:00 AM
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Reason, that is exactly what I wanted, thank you~
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Terry Shuff
Date: 5/26/2018 1:02:00 PM
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Genuine Haiku, Basho would be proud
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Constance La France
Date: 5/27/2018 6:02:00 AM
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terry, thank you for visiting and for that incredible compliment ~
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Silent One
Date: 5/26/2018 11:48:00 AM
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Simply beautiful..
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Constance La France
Date: 5/26/2018 1:01:00 PM
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Silent thank you for the beautiful

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