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A Merman's Tale

There once was a fellow whose name was Dan Who swore his grandfather was a Merman He lived near the sea One day he had to flea Folk say he jumped in the ocean, Ask Stan Stan was Dan's twin, he thought he was crazy He pegged his own brother, town fool and lazy One day at the beach He saw with in reach It was Dan with huge fins, although hazy 7-26-19 Contest:Two Sea-Themed Limericks Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 8/7/2019 12:14:00 PM
Hello Alxis Y. this is a cute poem. So Dan turned into a merman after all. His brother can visit him often at the beach. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 8/1/2019 10:27:00 PM
I think it would be great to have fins! Lucky Dan!
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Date: 7/30/2019 1:42:00 PM
Oh Alexis this was fun and loved the story - the million dollar question is who of the two was crazy? LOL LOL. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/29/2019 1:56:00 PM
LOL that was wonderful and I'm happy for Dan. Best of luck in contest ;0)
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Date: 7/27/2019 5:13:00 PM
LOL, Alexis! You've got a winner here. I love great lims and these are great. Glad my Mermaid write gave you a smile. Best of luck in the contest and have a grand weekend - Bob H
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