A Mermaid's Song

As I walked on a lonely beach,
     I thought I spied a Mermaid--
But no, it couldn't be, I thought. 
Yet, drawing near, I saw it was
    a Mermaid sunning on a rock.
   Her back, I saw, and fins. 
     as I looked on in shock.    
She couldn't see me as I crept forward,
     hid and watched
Her hair, like spun gold, blew gently
     in Summer's breeze.
Her skin, an opalescent green--
     by that, I mean
there were mingled hues
      of peridot and opal
creating a soft sea green.
     and, when she moved,
     created opal's fire
          amid her sheen
Her hands were webbed but versatile
     and I could only stare
     as she braided sunbeams
          in her hair.      
She began to hum
which soon became a song she sang
     the music haunting,
yet nestled deep
     were sounds of waves
     kissing shore--
          music I longed to keep.
Her song reached a crescendo
     as sea waves crashed.
A moment only, I turned 
     and glanced at the sea.
When I looked back,
     she had disappeared...
       into a memory.            
I found a pebble she had left
of iridescent green--a gift.
     All along, she knew
     I watched. 
Often, at dusk,    
I walk the lonely sands
     and search for her.
          I listen for her song...
                but she has gone.
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May Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 6:33 AM
An enchanting story of a mermaid, and her haunting song, Very nicely penned Ann
Peck Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 8:17 AM
Thank you so very much, Joseph!
Clear Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 9:39 AM
OH ANNE, I WISH I HAS BEEN ON YOUR BEACH. SO PRETTY AND EQUISITE! LOVED THE GIFT SHE GAVE YOU TO TREASURE. GREAT EMOTION AND CREATIVITY . THX, AM SMILING NOW! suzanne clear
Peck Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 3:47 PM
Thanks so much, dear Suzanne. I wish it had been true :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 12:28 PM
wow, Ann. I am nearing the end of my commenting for the day and my other FAVE for the day is THIS gem. So beautiful!!
Peck Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 4:30 PM
Oh, Andrea, you're so kind. I almost didn't post this for fear people would think it stupid. Thank you so much for liking it :)
Horne Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 7:32 AM
this is really lovely
Peck Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 1:35 PM
Thank you so much, Jack :)
Sangster - K Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 12:24 AM
Your poem perfectly painted a beautiful picture of the elusive mermaid. This is lovely Ann and I enjoyed reading it. Cheers my friend :-)
Peck Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 4:33 PM
Thank you so much, Anne. I was afraid people might think it stupid. And, yes--she is elusive. I wish she was real :)
Horsman Avatar
March 1, 2022 at 6:57 PM
A gift for your wonderful poetry, Ann, a well deserved one.
Peck Avatar
March 2, 2022 at 9:05 AM
Dear Harry, thanks for your kind thoughts. Take care :)
Brown Avatar
March 1, 2022 at 5:59 PM
Ann, I enjoyed the mermaid story. Well penned. Blessings ~ Debra
Peck Avatar
March 2, 2022 at 1:47 PM
Dear Debra, Thanks so much for your comments. Take care :)
Kauffman Avatar
March 1, 2022 at 2:37 PM
I love your mermaid's tale - so creative - with a great lesson to take in all the miracles we can for maybe we will be left with "green stones" to treasure when the storms come. Blessings!
Peck Avatar
March 2, 2022 at 9:03 AM
Dear Sam, Thank you so much for your thoughts. I hesitated to post this, but you put a different look to the poem that is beautiful :)
Leffanta Avatar
March 1, 2022 at 10:46 AM
Life certainly changes when we blink! Enjoyed, Ann! Aloha!
Peck Avatar
March 1, 2022 at 11:18 AM
HaHa! You're too funny, Rico :) I love your comments. Aloha!
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