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A Mermaid's Song

As I walked on a lonely beach, I thought I spied a Mermaid-- But no, it couldn't be, I thought. Yet, drawing near, I saw it was a Mermaid sunning on a rock. Her back, I saw, and fins. as I looked on in shock. She couldn't see me as I crept forward, hid and watched Her hair, like spun gold, blew gently in Summer's breeze. Her skin, an opalescent green-- by that, I mean there were mingled hues of peridot and opal creating a soft sea green. and, when she moved, created opal's fire amid her sheen Her hands were webbed but versatile and I could only stare as she braided sunbeams in her hair. She began to hum which soon became a song she sang the music haunting, yet nestled deep were sounds of waves kissing shore-- music I longed to keep. Her song reached a crescendo as sea waves crashed. A moment only, I turned and glanced at the sea. When I looked back, she had disappeared... into a memory. I found a pebble she had left of iridescent green--a gift. All along, she knew I watched. Often, at dusk, I walk the lonely sands and search for her. I listen for her song... but she has gone.

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Date: 3/14/2022 6:33:00 AM
An enchanting story of a mermaid, and her haunting song, Very nicely penned Ann
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/14/2022 8:17:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Joseph!
Date: 3/7/2022 9:39:00 AM
OH ANNE, I WISH I HAS BEEN ON YOUR BEACH. SO PRETTY AND EQUISITE! LOVED THE GIFT SHE GAVE YOU TO TREASURE. GREAT EMOTION AND CREATIVITY . THX, AM SMILING NOW! suzanne clear
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/7/2022 3:47:00 PM
Thanks so much, dear Suzanne. I wish it had been true :)
Date: 3/6/2022 12:28:00 PM
wow, Ann. I am nearing the end of my commenting for the day and my other FAVE for the day is THIS gem. So beautiful!!
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/6/2022 4:30:00 PM
Oh, Andrea, you're so kind. I almost didn't post this for fear people would think it stupid. Thank you so much for liking it :)
Date: 3/4/2022 7:32:00 AM
this is really lovely
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/4/2022 1:35:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jack :)
Date: 3/4/2022 12:24:00 AM
Your poem perfectly painted a beautiful picture of the elusive mermaid. This is lovely Ann and I enjoyed reading it. Cheers my friend :-)
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/13/2022 4:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne. I was afraid people might think it stupid. And, yes--she is elusive. I wish she was real :)
Date: 3/1/2022 6:57:00 PM
A gift for your wonderful poetry, Ann, a well deserved one.
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/2/2022 9:05:00 AM
Dear Harry, thanks for your kind thoughts. Take care :)
Date: 3/1/2022 5:59:00 PM
Ann, I enjoyed the mermaid story. Well penned. Blessings ~ Debra
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/2/2022 1:47:00 PM
Dear Debra, Thanks so much for your comments. Take care :)
Date: 3/1/2022 2:37:00 PM
I love your mermaid's tale - so creative - with a great lesson to take in all the miracles we can for maybe we will be left with "green stones" to treasure when the storms come. Blessings!
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/2/2022 9:03:00 AM
Dear Sam, Thank you so much for your thoughts. I hesitated to post this, but you put a different look to the poem that is beautiful :)
Date: 3/1/2022 10:46:00 AM
Life certainly changes when we blink! Enjoyed, Ann! Aloha!
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/1/2022 11:18:00 AM
HaHa! You're too funny, Rico :) I love your comments. Aloha!

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