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A Mermaid - Waterhouse

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mid song yet almost lost to longing methods of the mundane soothe no more the distance holds my gaze in ways that purge time but not infatuation the intricacy of binding spells compels steals me back to last gasps of ecstasy the shimmers of tears clash with murmurs still embedded in stone the lapping waters draw me under until it is I, that is too weak of will so, in your embrace, I would expire entranced completely by desire no lapsing thoughts nor dread in swathes but a mystery scaled in a myriad of ways woken up and ushered in retrieved from perpetuality of sin by moving earth and crashing wave transfixed eternal by all the ways you save

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Date: 6/17/2025 12:36:00 PM
I do wonder what the mermaid was singing when caught mid song Dilly perhaps Sweet surrender by Wet Wet Wet lol! Sorry! couldn’t resist the impulse! This is beautifully crafted Ekphrasis, A mystery scaled in a myriad of ways, where do you find such pitch perfect words, you have certainly hit the water swimming with this exquisite piece, I’m compelled to dive in and fave, cheers David
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Date: 6/17/2025 3:10:00 PM
One look was all it took lol :) ahh pitch perfect words - I wrote this during a two hour walk in the woods, that line gave me no issues but I probably spent an hour on the middle stanza, which didn't quite work but couldn't be cut - such is life! I'm delighted this made a splash, beats staring into space :) Thank you David, I appreciate your support x
Date: 6/17/2025 10:56:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your "A Mermaid - Waterhouse" write/story. Great Picture. I can feel the water. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............
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Date: 6/17/2025 10:59:00 AM
Cute! Glad you liked it Paula - it was a fun one to write :)
Date: 6/17/2025 9:20:00 AM
mid song yet almost lost to longing … the lapping waters draw me under until it is I, that is, too weak of will…very nice! Love the title.
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Date: 6/17/2025 9:28:00 AM
Haha the title belongs to Waterhouse, so no credit for that but thank you for stopping by x

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