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^^^^^ My people are the Ojibwa, fierce and strong, a people of stories and myths and knowledge; on birch bark scrolls and stones their history told, and I, a mere Ojibwa girl, write stories . . . There, upon a sheer and rocky cliff the Appaloosa horse of many colors stands majestic. There, under the blazing blue sky an Ojibwa warrior looks at me with great love. There, in the air and wind that roars. his feathers earned in acts of bravery quietly move. There, nestled in his strong arms my turquoise and glass beaded dress sparkles in the sun. There, below the Ottawa River thunders and the vast lands of Canada stretch to the horizon. There, above in that perfect sky eagles soar together as a symbol of Ojibwa unity. There, the only sound is the wind that moves his feathers. ______________________ May 24, 2013 Poetry/Free Verse/A Mere Ojibwe Girl Copyright Protected, ID 13-1072-902-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Mid October 2018 sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 10/24/2018 9:41:00 AM
Thank you Maureen, Andrea, Sun, Jo, Kishan, Sand, Arturo, Jesse, Line, and Vijay for your comments and congratulations, appreciate ~
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Date: 10/23/2018 5:50:00 PM
Congrats on your first place win, Dear Heart. Your poem has such wonderful cadence of authenticity. A sincere depiction...imagery that is you and about you.
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Date: 10/22/2018 4:03:00 PM
Bravo. Congrats on your top win. I would never tire of reading native-themed poetry. It would be awesome for you to publish your works, Constance.
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Date: 10/22/2018 2:44:00 PM
I can FEEL the wind of your words.
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Date: 10/22/2018 11:11:00 AM
Power spirits speak of your poem.....All the best Dear Heart...
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Date: 10/22/2018 10:05:00 AM
very nice
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Date: 10/22/2018 7:37:00 AM
Good one dear
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Date: 10/22/2018 5:55:00 AM
A very nice picture you paint with your words, Constance:)
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Date: 10/21/2018 5:12:00 PM
Beautiful! I love "Indianese."
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Date: 10/20/2018 11:17:00 PM
this is so gorgeous, I can just picture it. FAVE
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Date: 10/20/2018 9:13:00 PM
Wonderful, I can see it and it glistens. xomo
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