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A Mere Ojibwe Girl

^^^^^ My people are the Ojibwa, fierce and strong, a people of stories and myths and knowledge; on birch bark scrolls and stones their history told, and I, a mere Ojibwa girl, write stories . . . There, upon a sheer and rocky cliff the Appaloosa horse of many colors stands majestic. There, under the blazing blue sky an Ojibwa warrior looks at me with great love. There, in the air and wind that roars. his feathers earned in acts of bravery quietly move. There, nestled in his strong arms my turquoise and glass beaded dress sparkles in the sun. There, below the Ottawa River thunders and the vast lands of Canada stretch to the horizon. There, above in that perfect sky eagles soar together as a symbol of Ojibwa unity. There, the only sound is the wind that moves his feathers. ______________________ May 24, 2013 Poetry/Free Verse/A Mere Ojibwe Girl Copyright Protected, ID 13-1072-902-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Mid October 2018 sponsor, Brian Strand First Place
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La France Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 9:41 AM
Thank you Maureen, Andrea, Sun, Jo, Kishan, Sand, Arturo, Jesse, Line, and Vijay for your comments and congratulations, appreciate ~
Pandit Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 5:50 PM
Congrats on your first place win, Dear Heart. Your poem has such wonderful cadence of authenticity. A sincere depiction...imagery that is you and about you.
Gauthier Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 4:03 PM
Bravo. Congrats on your top win. I would never tire of reading native-themed poetry. It would be awesome for you to publish your works, Constance.
Rowe Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 2:44 PM
I can FEEL the wind of your words.
Michael Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 11:11 AM
Power spirits speak of your poem.....All the best Dear Heart...
Blown Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 10:05 AM
very nice
Sharma Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Good one dear
Daniel Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 5:55 AM
A very nice picture you paint with your words, Constance:)
Wanter Avatar
October 21, 2018 at 5:12 PM
Beautiful! I love "Indianese."
Dietrich Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 11:17 PM
this is so gorgeous, I can just picture it. FAVE
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 9:13 PM
Wonderful, I can see it and it glistens. xomo
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