A Memorial

Disorderly,
His confusion organized,
Grotesquely haphazard.
She never stopped complaining,
Harping him to distraction.
 
Even now, he had to search
For a miserable hammer.
Cellar dark,
Hands outstretched,
Light switch elusive,
He hit his head,
Against a beam.
Till he found 
That for which he needed.
 
He hung her portrait
Smack in the middle 
Of a bare wall,
Above her beloved dresser,
An antique piece which he abhorred.
He bought a lamp
And vowed it would be lit
Below the face 
That looked at him
From high above,
Imploring urgently,
Almost begging him
To do better.
He took up the hammer again
He fixed the small bronze plaque
As level as he only knew how
And read the words there written:
"My beloved Mother".
He smiled.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 2:51 PM
I was thinking at first maybe she was still alive and he had other plans for the hammer!!
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January 4, 2021 at 2:50 PM
for me this is a bit twisted, or Stephen King-like. Which means, I like it a LOT!
Buehler Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 8:49 PM
This poem tugs at the heartstrings, Victor. His love for his mother is evident in his actions and in his smile at the end. It's a Fave. :=)
Crabtree Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 5:04 PM
The memory of your mother will be forever preserved on your wall. A great poem, Victor :)
Tor Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 9:03 PM
Victor love this one. Making it a favorite. Great piece my friend... so many wonderful things to say about this poem. Have a wonderful day...
Horsman Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:58 PM
Reminds me of writing a poem, Victor i tend to fumble a lot. Love the theme here, and the story, with its conclusion...Happy New Year my friend.
Ball Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:26 PM
Well done Victor. I see here a man who was always trying to please a mother who was always pushing him to do better. Well done. God Bless and Happy New Year. JB Sorry pulled another disappearing act. Was very sick with dizzy spells and nausea for some time. Finally called in sick with horrible stomach pain. Ended up in E.R. with ruptured appendix. Two weeks in hospital and then home on total bed rest. Getting stronger now. Taking short walks. Seeing doctor for follow up exam. Jan.6. ;)
Buhagiar Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:45 PM
Thank God you're ok. A raptured appendix is no joke. Glad the worst is over.. Wishing you a healthy New Year.
Dome Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 2:37 PM
A good Mum is a true hero. Wonderful write my friend. well done.
Andresen Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 10:45 AM
- She's the best in the world :) - A lovely poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 10:15 AM
Mothers are good for giving us advise besides embracing their children. An honor he bestowed on his mother by hanging her picture and fixing a small plaque to place at the bottom of the frame . Love the verse, Victor. Hugs Eve
Pandit Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:50 AM
Your ending always has a touch of brilliance, Victor. Great story in honor of all mothers.
Mcintosh Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 2:56 AM
Always honor mom... Mine is sweeter than anyone I know and never harped at all. Love to you and B L E S S I N G S too
Edmonds  Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 2:19 AM
That’s a lovely memorial poem Victor, one should always honour their beloved mother. An illuminated portrait hung on a wall is nice way to be honoured and to say it all. All the best ~~ Belle
Cunningham Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 2:09 AM
The job that got done in the end,how often we've been fumbling in the dark to get a job done, more haste less speed. Tom
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