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A Memorial

Disorderly, His confusion organized, Grotesquely haphazard. She never stopped complaining, Harping him to distraction. Even now, he had to search For a miserable hammer. Cellar dark, Hands outstretched, Light switch elusive, He hit his head, Against a beam. Till he found That for which he needed. He hung her portrait Smack in the middle Of a bare wall, Above her beloved dresser, An antique piece which he abhorred. He bought a lamp And vowed it would be lit Below the face That looked at him From high above, Imploring urgently, Almost begging him To do better. He took up the hammer again He fixed the small bronze plaque As level as he only knew how And read the words there written: "My beloved Mother". He smiled.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 1/4/2021 2:51:00 PM
I was thinking at first maybe she was still alive and he had other plans for the hammer!!
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Date: 1/4/2021 2:50:00 PM
for me this is a bit twisted, or Stephen King-like. Which means, I like it a LOT!
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Date: 1/3/2021 8:49:00 PM
This poem tugs at the heartstrings, Victor. His love for his mother is evident in his actions and in his smile at the end. It's a Fave. :=)
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Date: 1/3/2021 5:04:00 PM
The memory of your mother will be forever preserved on your wall. A great poem, Victor :)
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Date: 1/2/2021 9:03:00 PM
Victor love this one. Making it a favorite. Great piece my friend... so many wonderful things to say about this poem. Have a wonderful day...
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Date: 1/2/2021 6:58:00 PM
Reminds me of writing a poem, Victor i tend to fumble a lot. Love the theme here, and the story, with its conclusion...Happy New Year my friend.
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Date: 1/2/2021 6:26:00 PM
Well done Victor. I see here a man who was always trying to please a mother who was always pushing him to do better. Well done. God Bless and Happy New Year. JB Sorry pulled another disappearing act. Was very sick with dizzy spells and nausea for some time. Finally called in sick with horrible stomach pain. Ended up in E.R. with ruptured appendix. Two weeks in hospital and then home on total bed rest. Getting stronger now. Taking short walks. Seeing doctor for follow up exam. Jan.6. ;)
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Date: 1/2/2021 6:45:00 PM
Thank God you're ok. A raptured appendix is no joke. Glad the worst is over.. Wishing you a healthy New Year.
Date: 1/2/2021 2:37:00 PM
A good Mum is a true hero. Wonderful write my friend. well done.
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Date: 1/2/2021 10:45:00 AM
- She's the best in the world :) - A lovely poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/2/2021 10:15:00 AM
Mothers are good for giving us advise besides embracing their children. An honor he bestowed on his mother by hanging her picture and fixing a small plaque to place at the bottom of the frame . Love the verse, Victor. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/2/2021 6:50:00 AM
Your ending always has a touch of brilliance, Victor. Great story in honor of all mothers.
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Date: 1/2/2021 2:56:00 AM
Always honor mom... Mine is sweeter than anyone I know and never harped at all. Love to you and B L E S S I N G S too
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Date: 1/2/2021 2:19:00 AM
That’s a lovely memorial poem Victor, one should always honour their beloved mother. An illuminated portrait hung on a wall is nice way to be honoured and to say it all. All the best ~~ Belle
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Date: 1/2/2021 2:09:00 AM
The job that got done in the end,how often we've been fumbling in the dark to get a job done, more haste less speed. Tom
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