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A Melted Snowball

One cold winter day, I formed a great big snowball as big as it could be with my tiny hands. I pressed it very tightly, mittens on! Proud I was of it. It looked so grand! Home I went to store my snowball in the freezer. My brother, befuddled, took it out. It melted so small as it lay there on the floor - puddled! April 16, 2018 For the Contest of Line Gauthier A Melting Snowball poem -decreasing line by line in syllable count from 12 to 2.

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Date: 5/25/2018 10:10:00 AM
:)
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Date: 4/19/2018 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Lol I always wished for a brother... not so much now. :)
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Date: 4/18/2018 11:13:00 PM
A snowball puddle! Nice one, Andrea!
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Date: 4/18/2018 10:39:00 AM
Aww ...that stinky brother! lol We didn't get to play in snow grvowing up here in Louisiana but I could picture this Andie!
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Date: 4/18/2018 3:53:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win.
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Date: 4/17/2018 7:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win , Andrea.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/17/2018 3:20:00 PM
Delightful, Andrea! Oh, those pesky brothers. At least you could make another one after the next snowfall. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/17/2018 12:05:00 PM
- Best wishes and congratulations with your 3rd place in the contest, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/17/2018 11:18:00 AM
aww - makes me glad I didn't have a brother lol:-) charming tale Andrea, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/17/2018 10:42:00 AM
Congrats on your bronze medal finish with this charming sad saga, Andrea. Well done.
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Date: 4/17/2018 4:09:00 AM
Another difficult challenge you have mastered, Andrea. Sure to be on the winners list
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Date: 4/16/2018 11:27:00 PM
Great concept ,Andrea,A melting snowball - decreasing lines. Such a cute creative poetry. I loved it... Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 4/16/2018 7:20:00 PM
well done, andrea! i could picture the whole scene...
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Date: 4/16/2018 7:07:00 PM
Brothers are like that. When you make cookies they bite the heads off the gingerbread men. Very cute poem Andtra.
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Date: 4/16/2018 1:46:00 PM
What are brothers for? Well done...
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Date: 4/16/2018 11:12:00 AM
Your story rings true--well crafted poem, Andrea..best for a win.
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Date: 4/16/2018 10:49:00 AM
Brothers, what else is there to say, I have 5...sorry to hear about your snowball...good luck in the contest
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