Home » Poems » Eileen Manassian » A Melody Divine- Hexsonnetta

Eileen Manassian | + Follow Poet |

A Melody Divine- Hexsonnetta

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Eileen Manassian.

A melody divine, transposed from outer sphere where angels hover near comes down in metered time: a sweet delightful chime so jubilant and clear. The notes flow in my heart, and they assuage the pain. Mellifluous refrain of sweet poetic art, they make my healing start, and bring in joy to reign. On dulcet rhymes, I fly, to claim poetic sky. For Andrea Dietrich's HexSonnetta Contest August 19, 2015

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Michael Tor

Date: 9/29/2015 8:27:00 PM

Congratulations Eileen!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/30/2015 10:07:00 PM

I'm so sorry I'm late with my response to your post on my Hexonetta, Michael. Thanks! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/28/2015 3:26:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/30/2015 10:08:00 PM

Thank you for your visit to my Hexonetta, Sara. I really appreciate it.

Lycia Harding

Date: 9/26/2015 10:48:00 AM

This is excellent, Eileen! So uplifting and etheral. Congrats on your celestial win, my Dear, I'm proud to share the winners circle with such a Poet as you!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/30/2015 10:09:00 PM

Thank you for your visit to my Hexonetta, Lycia. I'm a bit late in responding. So sorry. I appreciate your kind words. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/21/2015 2:01:00 AM

Wonderful write Eileen n yet another superb win! Big congrats!

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/20/2015 10:49:00 AM

Back to congratulate you, Eileen! hugs!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2015 2:14:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by, Kim. It's much appreciated. Hugs

Bill Lindsay

Date: 9/20/2015 5:28:00 AM

Rarely have I seen 59 words aligned so perfectly. Would that I had your talent. Big congrats. ;)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2015 2:15:00 PM

Thank you, Bill. :) You are very kind....Hugs

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/19/2015 10:03:00 PM

You are a "melody divine" Eileen...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2015 2:15:00 PM

Thank you for making my heart sing, Eagle. :) Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2015 4:37:00 PM

Eileen, the MESSAGE of yours was just perfect for this poetry form. and you said it all so beautifully, Just had to give a tie for top win. I had NO CLUE this was yours. Wow, I am glad that you finally got that win from me that you said at the blog you always wanted. congratulations.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2015 2:16:00 PM

:) I'm thrilled beyond belief, my dear. Honestly....Thanks ever so much. Hugs

Skat A

Date: 9/19/2015 4:19:00 PM

Hi Eileen, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2015 2:16:00 PM

Thank you, Skat. I'm very happy. :) Hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 9/19/2015 2:36:00 PM

Big congratulations, Eileen!! I'm so happy for you attaining first place in this challenging contest. Indeed you have claimed poetic sky, both with the lovely content and with perfect meter:) Andrea is a fair judge...she favours the brave, the hard-working and the talented; you are one of them:) hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2015 2:17:00 PM

Thank you ever so much, Paul. I can't tell you how happy this win makes me....honestly, I'm thrilled! :) I tried very very hard....Thanks for the lovely visit.

James Inman

Date: 9/19/2015 12:49:00 PM

I would not want to be Andrea having to choose from the selection of poems that were written for this contest. This is wonderful Eileen.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2015 2:18:00 PM

I'm glad you liked this, James. You are right. It is very hard to be a sponsor. That's why I haven't hosted a contest yet....I appreciate the visit.

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/19/2015 12:41:00 PM

Amazingly beautiful, Eileen. So worthy of your First Place win! Congratulations! Hugs, Sandra

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/19/2015 12:44:00 PM

Thank you! I'm so pleased that you liked it. I really worked hard on this one, Sandra. I know that Andrea is a tough cookie of a judge. :) Hugs

Faye Gibson

Date: 9/19/2015 12:19:00 PM

This is beautiful, Eileen. Happy to share this placement with you. Congratulations.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/19/2015 12:20:00 PM

Thank you, Faye....So kind of you to visit. I'm thrilled that Andrea liked my piece. I've tried so hard to please her as a sponsor. I will be by to visit your poem soon, dear. Congrats!!! Hugs

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/19/2015 10:11:00 AM

Just lovely, Eileen !! Congratulations!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/19/2015 12:25:00 PM

Thank you, Carrie. Your approval means a great deal to me. :)

CayCay Jennings

Date: 9/19/2015 10:07:00 AM

Your poem is absolutely beautiful ... CayCay

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/19/2015 12:27:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comment, CayCay. :) Will be by to visit you soon.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/19/2015 10:05:00 AM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Eileen :-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/19/2015 12:28:00 PM

Thank you, sweetie....I'm so happy!!! Congrats to you too. Hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 8/21/2015 4:13:00 PM

simply a poetic delight Eileen good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Richard D Seal

Date: 8/19/2015 6:42:00 PM

Many poems have been written exalting the beauty and effect of poetry, this my little Desert Orchid, is right up there with the best I've ever read. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/19/2015 11:55:00 PM

Mr Seal....thanks ever so much. I miss the teasing and the banter. You are way too serious of late....Lighten up! :) Remember Agony Auntie??? Remember how incorrigible you were....I want that Mr Seal back! ;) Hugs

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/19/2015 6:20:00 PM

Andrea loves the 'dulcet' word and I believe she s gonna love this Eileen. Your poetry is indeed music to my ears and it flows in my heart so beautifully.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/19/2015 11:57:00 PM

:) Hello, soul sister. Always a joy to see your pretty face at one of my poems. I do hope Andrea likes it. I'm going to keep trying with her till I get that first place spot.....or die in the effort. Second place has been the closest. She challenges me. Love ya.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/19/2015 3:25:00 PM

Genius creation..Way to go for the contest..Readslike a winner..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2015 12:03:00 AM

What sweet sweet comment, Sara. Thanks for the visit. I hope your issues with the computer get sorted out soon. Hugs

Jack Ellison

Date: 8/19/2015 12:36:00 PM

Wonderful awesome write my dear Miss Boop! Well done... a winner for sure! Love, Kenny xxx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2015 12:04:00 AM

:) Here's hoping, dear Kenny. I have read some sweet ones....Check out Paul Callus and Kim Merryman's HexSonnettas....Chances are slim for me! Hugs

Nudershada Cabanes

Date: 8/19/2015 10:33:00 AM

Awesomely written Aileen. A 7!! good luck in the contest...hugs ~Nudershada

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/19/2015 10:35:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and well wishes. :)

Anu Nayak

Date: 8/19/2015 10:23:00 AM

Dear Eileen, Adorable and awesome!7!! good luck for the contest...love, Anu:-)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/19/2015 10:25:00 AM

Hey, sweetie! :) Thanks for the visit and the lovely post. You are always sweet. Hugs!!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/19/2015 9:53:00 AM

Angelically melodic, indulging the soul! Good luck dear Eileen! A seven.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/19/2015 9:54:00 AM

:) Thank you, my dear esteemed poet. You bring me joy. Hugs...kai filakia.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/19/2015 9:50:00 AM

I am unfamiliar with the form but I like the result and imagery in this piece Eileen. Hugs Rick.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/19/2015 9:54:00 AM

:) Thanks, Richard. It took a whole lot out of me, but I do like a challenge. It is Andrea's own form! Isn't that amazing???? You have your own form....I did a form that Craig used as a contest prompt. Perhaps it's time I host a contest on the Eileenette. :) Hugs