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A Masters Hand

This soul must yield to a Master's hand
At path's end, with toil endured
Destined worth, its truth assured
As winters frost nips at the rose
Shorn from time, as cold winds blow
This soul must yield to a Master's hand

With source of light that guides my way
Beyond these shrouds before me lay
A peace, nor I could understand
This soul found hope with a Master's hand
Such repose within this heart I felt
With veneration, my will has knelt

The warmth of spring doth fill the air
As only one could answer prayer.

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Paul Callus April 16, 2018 at 5:17 PM A beautiful and inspiring poem, Charlie. Well done! Regards // paul

Joseph P. DiMino February 13, 2018 at 7:43 AM Very beautiful and inspiring, Charlie; great poetry! Charlie Smith February 13, 2018 at 12:21 PM Thank you Joe...

Mike Reed December 21, 2017 at 11:02 AM Good Work! Mike Reed Charlie Smith December 21, 2017 at 8:48 PM Thank you Mike...

John Hamilton December 10, 2017 at 5:58 PM Lovely spiritual write Charlie well done! Charlie Smith December 11, 2017 at 12:20 PM Thank you so much John...

Chris Hagy December 2, 2017 at 7:08 PM Wonderful write Charlie! Faith is a warm and wondrous thing... and you capture it well :) Have great day Charlie Smith December 3, 2017 at 8:46 PM Thank you Chris...

Andrea Dietrich December 1, 2017 at 9:05 PM This is very beautiful, Charlie. I really like it.

Joseph May December 1, 2017 at 12:07 PM Beautifully written Charlie Charlie Smith December 3, 2017 at 8:46 PM Thank you Joseph...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 30, 2017 at 12:21 PM Gorgeous deep ink Charlie xomo Charlie Smith December 1, 2017 at 11:31 AM Thank you Maureen...

Winged Warrior November 30, 2017 at 9:01 AM A Masters hand you have Charlie...great spiritual write my friend...god bless...^WW^ Charlie Smith November 30, 2017 at 11:56 AM Peace be with you WW...

Andrea Dietrich November 29, 2017 at 2:45 PM this is a very lovely spiritual poem, Charlie. Charlie Smith November 30, 2017 at 8:29 AM Thank you Andrea...

Chuck Melugin November 29, 2017 at 6:03 AM Charlie, Truth paints your poetic revelation! Healing is presented by a wounded hand. God bless you! Charlie Smith November 29, 2017 at 1:43 PM Peace be with you Chuck, thank you...,

Connie Marcum Wong November 28, 2017 at 1:09 PM Your lovely poem enriches us with hope and faith Charlie. Your poems always inspire me. A wonderful Yuletide blessing! I love it! : ) Charlie Smith November 28, 2017 at 1:28 PM Thank you Connie, and blessings to you and your family this holiday season...

Sunlite Wanter November 27, 2017 at 6:28 PM Just beautiful - and hopeful, Charlie!!! Charlie Smith November 28, 2017 at 12:24 PM Thank you Sunlite...

Arthur Vaso November 27, 2017 at 5:40 PM Beautiful and contemplative poem! Charlie Smith November 28, 2017 at 12:23 PM Thank you Arthur...

Arturo Michael November 27, 2017 at 4:57 PM So true my friend...All the best to you Charlie... Charlie Smith November 28, 2017 at 12:23 PM And to you Arturo, thanks...

Heidi Sands November 27, 2017 at 3:27 PM Oh I love this one Charlie. A favorite for me :) Very well written! Charlie Smith November 28, 2017 at 12:22 PM Thank you Heidi...

Kim Rodrigues November 27, 2017 at 3:26 PM A lovely sonnet! Yes, indeed, yield to the Master’s hand! Charlie Smith November 28, 2017 at 12:22 PM Thank you Kim...

Silent One November 27, 2017 at 3:17 PM This could be a sonnet... Excellent rhyme and flow.. Charlie Smith November 28, 2017 at 12:22 PM Could be but I really didn't plan it that way, thanks SO...

Vijay Pandit November 27, 2017 at 3:07 PM A beautiful rhythmic depiction--love the flow--well written, Charlie! Charlie Smith November 28, 2017 at 12:20 PM Thank you Vijay...