A Magical Moonlit Night

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It's a lovely magical night in June, lovers dance under the moon. They're in sync with the soft tune; tonight is the couple's honeymoon. A blue Jay nearby starts to croon; onlookers just stare and swoon. The young lovers married at noon, they can't wait to cuddle and spoon. Alexis Y. 05/22/2021

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/22/2021 11:29:00 PM

Loved your monorhyme. It is so smooth and pleasing. Hugs.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/22/2021 8:29:00 PM

This excellent poem is romance magic, Alexis, and it is a fave for me. Be blessed, Evelyn :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/22/2021 8:19:00 PM

'Cuddle and spoon' is a new one for me. I like it! Both thumbs up. ~ The Cow that jumped over the Moon

Jan Allison

Date: 5/22/2021 5:23:00 PM

how romantic Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/22/2021 3:31:00 PM

Wonderfully romantic my friend. Enjoyed the read.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/22/2021 2:27:00 PM

I am so happy to read your work, Alex. The tone is really nice, and it sounds like a lovely song, with just the right amount of tone. I enjoy reading it. Have a great weekend