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A Magical Dream

I dreamed a dream of a magical place, it was an enchanted forest dark green; oh, a sweet butterfly just kissed my face, and brilliant wildflowers sway and dance with grace, a fish jumps in a pond leaving no trace, I love my dream of a forest serene. I dreamed a dream of a magical place; it was an enchanted forest dark green. I love my dream of a forest serene, and within the trees waits my childhood horse; last time I saw Razzle I was sixteen, I let go of all that's happened between, and embrace with love this unfolding scene, my sweet horse is soft and in places coarse. I love my dream of a forest serene; and within the trees waits my childhood horse. My sweet horse is soft and in places coarse, and we are soaring in and out of trees; I am letting go of all my remorse, and music is playing from some far source, I stand in a meadow with a wind force, and weeping sad tears I fall to my knees. My sweet horse is soft and in places coarse; and we are soaring in and out of trees. ___________________________________ February 17, 2019 Poetry/Rhyme/A Magical Dream Copyright Protected, ID 19-1217-945-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted into Strand Choice Contest sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 1/21/2020 11:53:00 AM
You have taken this beautiful scene to the heart Dear Heart! Lonna
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Constance La France
Date: 1/21/2020 11:04:00 PM
Lonna, thanks for visiting and for the comment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 1/20/2020 10:35:00 PM
Constance, What a beautiful memoir poem - delicate as a dreams - lovely format. Congratulations! Well deserved!!
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Date: 1/21/2020 11:04:00 PM
Sam, thanks so much for the congratulations and for the beautiful _Constance
Date: 1/20/2020 8:54:00 AM
I would like to go there. It sounds like a truly lovely place. Free and happy... Well written, like a painter with colors in a box... imagery that pulls the reader in and keeps them... Well done. Ann
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Constance La France
Date: 1/20/2020 9:09:00 AM
Ann, thanks for visiting my poetry and for that absolutely beautiful comment, and the ultimate compliment a writer could ever receive ~
Date: 1/20/2020 2:11:00 AM
This is very lovely Constance. I too love horses tho I never owned one of my own. I used to ride often...I have even given reiki to horses who needed it. Best for a contest win! : ) xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 1/20/2020 9:10:00 AM
Connie, thanks for visiting my poetry and for the lovely, oh a horse whisperer, how divine ~

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